He Lived Till He Died

This is an obvious thing to say
well of course this is always the case
you are alive till the day you die
so certain for all the human race

Now let us ponder this for awhile
behind these words lies a mystery
because there's more than meets the eye
looking back on all of their history

For many live lives seem dead
their actions amount to such nothings
in their life never amounting to be
little knots instead of something

At one time show such promise
expecting to hit such dizzy heights
but disappointment was their cue
as dimmed down because sad lights

Trust in God and you really live
resurrection life brings true reward
live eternally in God's presence
holding on for the Lord's heavenly cord

(" He lived till he died"
I came across this quote on a park bench seat on holiday recently in the English lakes and it made me think about this choice of words is so profound that I have written this piece bringing out my own thoughts about it. )
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Richards Avatar
June 1, 2023 at 6:53 AM
Profound, yet a simple truth. Many only seem to go through the motions of living. Food for thought, Gordon.
Mcconnell Avatar
June 1, 2023 at 1:03 PM
Thanks Suzette, Glad you liked this piece and pleased it gave you food for thought. Blessings,Gordon
Daniel Avatar
May 30, 2023 at 5:33 AM
Deep and meaningful thoughts, Gordon:)
Mcconnell Avatar
May 30, 2023 at 8:22 AM
Thanks Joanna, Glad you found it deep and meaningful. Have a lovely day,Gordon
George Avatar
May 29, 2023 at 8:01 PM
Your poem gives much food for thought. 'Live till you are dead'.... ! We fail to see the real meaning of this phrase. We take it in the usual way. But live and live meaningfully requires special grace from God. Some live dead before death comes. Enjoyed this meaningful poem much, dear Gordon.
Mcconnell Avatar
May 30, 2023 at 8:21 AM
Thanks Valsa, Glad you found this a meaningful piece, with much food for thought. Have a lovely day,Gordon
Baker Avatar
May 28, 2023 at 5:21 PM
Thank you for sharing your thoughts on life and death through your poetry, Gordon. I agree. Until we are born again we have no hope of eternal life. It's just live and die. I enjoy your perspective on the subject and find it interesting that you found a bench with the raw message. Smiles ~ Blessings A poet friend in Texas, Bill
Mcconnell Avatar
May 29, 2023 at 4:09 AM
Thanks Bill, Glad you enjoyed this piece and found it appropriate to my subject, actually I saw the words on a bench last week on holiday at Grange over Sands in the English lake district. Have a blessed day,Gordon
Andresen Avatar
May 28, 2023 at 10:06 AM
- An interesting poem ... the title is excellent, Gordon - hugs
Mcconnell Avatar
May 28, 2023 at 12:12 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise, Glad you enjoyed this one and thought it an interesting piece. Blessings always,Gordon x
Pandit Avatar
May 28, 2023 at 7:46 AM
Your message resonates with me, Gordon. I can feel the profound vibes you speak of in this write. Much wisdom on how to live life.
Mcconnell Avatar
May 28, 2023 at 7:53 AM
Thanks Vijay, Glad this piece resonated with you so much, trust life is good with you this day. Blessings, Gordon
M  Avatar
May 28, 2023 at 7:34 AM
I like that Gordon “He Lived Till He Died” says it all really! Great poem…Debx
Mcconnell Avatar
May 28, 2023 at 7:40 AM
Thanks Deb, Glad you liked this one and thought it great. Blessings, Gordon x
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