He Likes Me?

he act's like he likes me
but that's a mistake
i could never love someone
who i sincerly hate



(entered in Nathans The Oppisite Sex contest)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kendrick Avatar
June 21, 2010 at 3:23 PM
Interesting thoughts that you have penned in this one..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
Babcock Avatar
June 13, 2010 at 7:57 PM
That is what you call a love hate relationship. God Bless Phyl
Chachere Avatar
May 30, 2010 at 1:16 AM
hate is sometimes very confusing. it can be the very opposite in many cases. but yours sounds like a competition with 'he'. make me think, great write. -always&forever lynette
Mason Avatar
May 16, 2010 at 3:35 PM
Good luck in the contest John. Was very sorry to hear about your father. Our time here is always too short ... Thanks for your recent comment and hope you are having sunny days !!
A  Avatar
May 16, 2010 at 1:13 PM
CONGRATS, ALSO THANKS FOR ALL THE ADVICE IT HALEPS.. THIS IS A GOOD VIEW FROM A WOMENS POINT OF VIEW, ENJOYED, irma (s.m.)
Babcock Avatar
May 10, 2010 at 7:46 PM
That is mighty strong words. God Bless Phyl
Culverhouse Avatar
May 9, 2010 at 6:30 PM
well, hope it is just fiction!!
Fraser Avatar
May 9, 2010 at 6:49 AM
Powerful, strong message in your words John, many congratulations on your win in Nathan's fine contest >> James
Guzzi Avatar
May 5, 2010 at 2:25 PM
awwwww women are that cruel and nastey? all of us have met lemons I guess BIG HUG! Light & Love
Burton Avatar
May 5, 2010 at 5:34 AM
He? thats cool I mean.. never mind, enjoyed the rym in this poetry here. Have a great day.:)
Mehta Avatar
May 4, 2010 at 6:50 PM
Nice interplay of words. Good luck
A   Avatar
May 4, 2010 at 6:30 PM
you pinpointed a dear sister of mine , who can never love the person she hates, no matter how hard he tries. poor him, love it John. good luck in the contest,..p.d.
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