He Heard the Train

He heard the train

A distant sound in dark of night

He heard the train

A lonely cry, a sad refrain

Like ghostly specters taking flight
Invisible to human sight

He heard the train


written by Steven Mossburg 7-21-11
For Rondelet Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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August 1, 2011 at 1:44 PM
Congrats Steven on your win ...enjoyed your poem.
Brown Avatar
August 1, 2011 at 11:15 AM
Congratulations on your poem placing in Dr. Ram Mehta's " Rondelet" contest Steven. Love, Carol
Johnson Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 9:04 PM
I think this is lovely. Congratulations on your win Steven. Love, Joyce
Freeman Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 8:35 PM
Steven, Congratulations in the winner's circle. Agape, Moses
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July 31, 2011 at 6:40 PM
really proud and glad to share the placement with you~~~~CONGRATULATIONS~~~smile~~~*-*junjun
Sweetheart Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 5:26 PM
Congrats Steven on your wonderful write and win with this brilliant beauty luv..
Dietrich Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 4:03 PM
I really like yours, sTeven. It could even work in the cry contest that just started!! congrats on your win.
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July 31, 2011 at 2:38 PM
A Ronelet Contest Congratulations! Caryl
Brown Avatar
July 22, 2011 at 7:12 AM
Happy weekend and thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry with us once again Steven. I am going to try and write some entries for the contests this weekend also. It is still so hot and humid here but we might get some relief next week. Wishing you a weekend filled with joy and inspiration. Love, Carol
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July 21, 2011 at 10:48 AM
great entry, good luck in the contest
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