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He Has Just Begun

of late when I wander through an obstacle without relief, throbbing breaths heave into evenings dark as raven's plume... and the crux of angst welcomes my own fables, my stories reflecting glassy eyes immersed in cries and doubt. as space of uncertainty drowns , I wrestle with faith on edge...yet in slow motion, cool breezes fill the vacant gaps allowing my sighs a meditative peaceful pause. Looking around, I find new blossoms touching my face, a heady pleasure tasting heaven's gift... my soul surrenders. O He is always on time with blessings anew...on hours when dark and light blend with God's holy evensong.

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Date: 6/18/2024 11:22:00 AM
Hi Nette! Back with congratulations on your win in Gina's contest. Well, here we are on the podium together. You were right! So happy to see this beautiful gem of faith on the winners list! Blessings of new creations for you!
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Date: 6/17/2024 3:06:00 AM
So sweetly expressed... it feels like a tender lullaby. Congrats on your placement in the contest! Such an uplifting, edifying one!<3
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Date: 6/12/2024 4:51:00 AM
What a struggle and peace you have sketched in this beautiful write with the beauty of divine colors and flowers touching you dear friend Nette in the entire beautiful poem like the blessings of God in the hour of darkness and our needs. Its great write which goes as my favorite also. With best wishes always..... Ravindra
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Date: 6/10/2024 11:30:00 AM
How did I miss your return to the soup! Have missed you! Welcome back! A beautiful evensong to sing reflecting on the blessings of the day. Best wishes for the contest. Blessings and hugs!
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Date: 6/10/2024 10:07:00 AM
Wonderful, Nette.
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Date: 6/9/2024 11:14:00 AM
I enjoyed the ending so much. Yes, He is always on time with what we need. Thanks for sharing your faith-based work with us. Sara K
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Date: 6/9/2024 9:15:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. "Good Luck" Have A Blessed Day Writing Away...........
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Date: 6/9/2024 8:31:00 AM
A lovely poem for the contest all the best..
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