He Had Once Known Contest

The room was dark, he breathed the air.
His tongue wisp, but spoke of sin.
Encompassed with intolerance.
He knew not of the world, as we do.
He could not feel, as we do.
He did not love, as we do.

No light, no sound, breathe. 
No thought, no love, no breeze blew. 
No sense, but he knew. 

His mind simmered.
His hands fell to his knees.
He screamed at the world.
"Why am I alive!"
"Why should I live, if I'm to die!"

Dim light, light sound, talk. 
Some thought, some love, the breeze blew. 
He smelled dew, he knew. 

The sun had started to rise.
He started to wonder.
He had started to think.
The memories flooded back to him.
He had once loved, but lost.
He had cared, long ago.
He understood.
He knew.

bright sky, songs sung, life. 
Overflowing emotions. 
Oh yes, he did know.

7/26/2015 
3 lines of Haibun (prose 3, haiku 3)
By Nathan Winter Karczewski (Apollo's Envy)
First Haibun! Enjoy!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Kendrick Avatar
August 23, 2015 at 8:21 AM
Congrats on your winning work with this very expressive work..Sara
Thirtyseven Avatar
August 21, 2015 at 8:33 AM
Enjoyable read, and I like the story progression. However your prose could do with being a little more prosey. Thanks for entering the contest, and keep having fun with Haibun.
A. Sharma Avatar
August 21, 2015 at 2:00 AM
Congrats on wonderful win Nathan with this amazing haibun!
A  Avatar
August 20, 2015 at 6:39 PM
Nathan, Congratulations on the win. SKAT
Allison Avatar
August 20, 2015 at 12:17 PM
Beautifully penned Nathan congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Rodgers Avatar
July 26, 2015 at 6:54 PM
Well known - good luck in the contest
Karczewski Avatar
July 29, 2015 at 11:33 PM
Thank you!
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