He Gave Her a Book

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"Heaven Open To Souls"  

I walked into the room and found an old tattered book 
sitting on my bed like a still born child wanting to be held 
On the cover lay a topple of flowers plucked from our garden 
and as I read the title, I came to understand my sister's creed

"Heaven Open To Souls"  was the fine print on the spine 
it made me drop a salty tear to see her favorite braille 
A book of poetry that held all the bible truths of death 
explaining how souls flew forth, from earth to heaven  

Evoking summers of our childhood readings on the porch 
I recalled her big sister smile and my youngling yawn of old 
Ann would tuck the little book inside her sweater and say,  
"eight fingers to touch my heaven and two for kissing you"  

But then one day she got leukemia and she soared away  
dad was breaking up in two so I showed him what to do 
sit by the porch emboss to her the words , I love you...
but it was not his memory but mine and oh how he knew 

so the next day he left it on my bed, for me to treasure find 
he knew that I had eyes to see but Ann, she was born blind.

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Date: 6/4/2021 9:37:00 AM
Such a touching and beautiful story. Congrats for your feature on POTD. Hugs, SuZ
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Date: 6/2/2021 9:01:00 AM
Such a sad poem. I was the oldest so my relationships were with my younger brothers and sisters. Even now being10 and 13 years apart with the youngest. Enjoyed reading and a great example for the contest. Hugs Eve
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Date: 5/31/2021 8:30:00 AM
O my goodness ~ what a touching poem. This is soooo beautiful and moving. It brought tears to my eyes. A FAVE for me.
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Date: 5/30/2021 1:50:00 PM
This poem is superb! Congrats on POTD! the bar is so high! is difficult to match this one!!
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Date: 5/30/2021 2:24:00 PM
My dear Krish, I was hoping that you would try and give me something original of your own, I love stories, turned into poems, any book any story line will do, Gl in the contest, if you choose to join, I hope you do
Date: 5/29/2021 10:07:00 AM
Rose, I am so sorry I missed this amazing, poetically perfect poem that got POTD , what an honor, congratulations, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 5/25/2021 4:37:00 AM
Such a beautiful and moving tribute to your sister Vie. Love the tenderness and title. Congrats on POTD
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Date: 5/20/2021 11:23:00 AM
So Touchy and Tender. I am charmed. Congrats n Love
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Date: 5/18/2021 9:11:00 AM
Awww such a touching story, so movingly expressed of a sister beloved born blind and lost but how she inspired of heaven wow!! Such a beautiful poem no wonder it earned a POTD honour, CONGRATS!!! Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
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Date: 5/17/2021 12:29:00 AM
Wow! This beautiful poem brought tears to my eyes Vie. It is expressed with such love and tenderness. I see why it was chosen for POTD. So deserving! A belated Congratulations on your wonderful honor. Blessings, Connie xxoo
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Date: 5/13/2021 11:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD, Mystic. I'm a bit late. Was in the hospital for a couple of days. Good job!
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Date: 5/13/2021 10:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD. This poem touched my heart - beautiful and moving! Love ~ Mala
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Date: 5/13/2021 6:13:00 AM
It's, indeed, very realistic!
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Date: 5/12/2021 11:01:00 PM
Wow Mystic Rose! What a touching poem about your sister! I’m so sorry she got sick and passed.
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Date: 5/12/2021 7:35:00 PM
A moving tribute to your sister Vie, Congrats on POTD
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Date: 5/12/2021 7:35:00 PM
Oh my ! I have chills and my eyes are misty after reading your words. This touches my heart so deeply. Your sister had a beautiful soul, and she was able to express herself in such an amazing way. I am caressing your thoughts gently around me. Congratulations Mystic Rose, on Poem of the Day. Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 5/12/2021 6:36:00 PM
Dear Rose, my heart's imagination was enthralled by the deep emotions of your beautiful poem. I was so very moved by this line in particular; ""eight fingers to touch my heaven and two for kissing you" - a perfect poignant moment in an exquisite poem that brought tears to my eyes. Layers of love and loss. Congratulations for POTD, a worthy and well-deserved honor for this inspiring poem. Warmest wishes, my sweet friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 5/12/2021 2:35:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 5/12/2021 1:05:00 PM
How kind of your dad to leave that book for you to find. I was very sorry to read about your sister. Congratulations on poem of the day… Belle
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Date: 5/12/2021 10:48:00 AM
A beautiful, sad poem. Congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 5/12/2021 10:35:00 AM
A blessing to read this this morning If not a PODT winner I would have missed it Congratulations - Ken
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Date: 5/12/2021 9:17:00 AM
Mystic, beautiful and congratulations on receiving POEM OF THE DAY enjoy the honor, love _Constance
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Date: 5/12/2021 8:45:00 AM
Back to congratulate you on POTD!
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Date: 5/12/2021 8:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. A beautiful/creative story/write. Love It. Have a blessed day with your win.............
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Date: 5/12/2021 7:23:00 AM
Beautifully written, Vie! Congrats on POTD! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 5/12/2021 6:07:00 AM
- Back with a congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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