He Didn'T Climb the Wall Again

HE DIDN'T CLIMB THE WALL AGAIN
A hefty dainty young man of twenty lived alone in a lane beside the town hall. People called him Humpty Dumpty because he could climb any high wall. He went all out to his effort’s end, colored his face, looked an Easter egg and searched for a sweet girlfriend, so her love he could create and beg. At long last one evening at the sunset he saw a smiling girl on a nearby balcony. He knew she was the girl he should get for he could no longer bear mental agony. His Juliet was there across the high wall, he thought as an expert he’d easily climb, but on it he couldn’t sit, tumbled, had a fall. Along with the heart he broke his limb. Nobody could put his heart’s pieces together. For the rest of his life he lived in bitter pain, the Romeo in him disappeared in the thin air. He didn’t try to climb and sit on a wall again.
June 27, 2018

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Date: 7/8/2018 10:24:00 PM
A lovely the twist in this story of Humpty Dumpty, Subimal. Congratulations on your awesome win! Hugs Eve
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 7/9/2018 12:01:00 AM
Thank you, Eve for your visit and words of appreciation.
Date: 7/7/2018 11:02:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Poor Humpty. Creative write. Enjoyed it.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 7/8/2018 12:39:00 AM
Thank you, Susan.
Date: 7/7/2018 10:18:00 AM
Hi Submial, Now this is good story telling. Congratulations on your placement in the contest:-) Alexis
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 7/8/2018 12:39:00 AM
Thank you, Alexis for your visit.
Date: 7/7/2018 9:53:00 AM
Congrats on your win as usual.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 7/8/2018 12:38:00 AM
Many thanks.
Date: 7/7/2018 8:24:00 AM
Poor romeo, he falls because he was searching for his juliet, many congratulations on your 2nd position in the contest, good luck and have a really nice day
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 7/8/2018 12:38:00 AM
Thank you, Faraz.
Date: 6/28/2018 1:51:00 PM
Why a tragic end? I have given Humpty Dumpty a positive approach.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 6/29/2018 1:27:00 AM
Thank you for your visit.
Date: 6/27/2018 10:26:00 AM
Sad write.. poor HD!
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 6/27/2018 11:48:00 PM
Thank you, Lyric for your visit.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 6/27/2018 11:48:00 PM
Thank you, Lyric for your visit.
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