He Did It All

Tears stream down my face
as I look above at the glistening sky
and wonder why.
Why did everything end?
He did it all.
Always caught me at my fall
Always cared to mend.
It never bothered,
the way he did.
Soon he realized wasn't worth life
when i saw him with that old bloody knife.

As i lie here, dreaming of something more
He is out there, creeping out a never-ending door.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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June 30, 2009 at 2:42 PM
Nicely written poem Ileana>>James
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June 29, 2009 at 11:40 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Ileana. I am hoping to read many more poems written by you. Love, Carol
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