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He Deep Sleeps Inside Dreams

he deep sleeps inside dreams seeming more innocent than mean new sun kisses him with light beams lending him its pure sheen while with bags, she leaves his regime ... CayCay May 16, 2019

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/24/2019 7:19:00 PM

This makes me think of a cruel "mister" by her leaving his "regime" and I would guess that he only is sweet looking in his dreams. Did I get that right? Congrats on your win,Caycay. soupmail for you too.

Robert Lindley

Date: 5/24/2019 2:51:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Dear Heart's Lind68868 contest my friend! God bless.... Robert

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/21/2019 11:49:00 AM

- Congratulations on your winning poem, CayCay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France

Date: 5/21/2019 9:48:00 AM

CayCay, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful write!

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 5/19/2019 7:27:00 PM

I like the mood you created with the contrasting ideas (lending him its pure sheen) best of luck in the contest, CayCay!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/16/2019 1:19:00 PM

Potent piece, CayCay, of the kind of scene that is all too commonplace still today. Eternal vigilance is needed to protect women from this kind of awful stuff. Well-expressed. ~ gw

Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/21/2019 11:54:00 AM

And back with congrats with your placement in the contest with this important poem! :) gw

Caycay Jennings
Date: 5/16/2019 2:02:00 PM

Thank you for visiting and the comments. It's a sad issue, way too much dysfunction in the world. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/16/2019 12:18:00 PM

Looks like she got out in the nick of time. Good luck CayCay. Tom

Caycay Jennings
Date: 5/16/2019 12:24:00 PM

Hey, you - many thanks! All the best ... CayCay

Jan Allison

Date: 5/16/2019 12:10:00 PM

powerfully penned CayCay it must be so difficult to escape an abuse relationship and slipping away whilst he's sleeping deeply is a perfect way:-) I love the way you've portrayed the guy mean but sleeping peacefully with no guilty feelings. I especially love that 3rd line!:-) hugs Jan xx

Caycay Jennings
Date: 5/16/2019 12:23:00 PM

Thank you, not only for your positive feedback but for giving me the first 'early' comment I've gotten in a long while - I can breathe easy! Always love to see you, Jan. Many hugs ... CayCay