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He Compared My Smile To a Sun

Kiss me until the stitches on my heart dissolve, and I forget what it feels like to breathe without lungs. Touch my skin until your fingertips warm my muscles, and help my blood run smoothly Your apartment is cold, but your eyes are colder; emptier too. Your hands held nothing but bad intentions, not even my own and as you tossed and turned in-between worn sheets, so did my mind. get me out of this bed give me back my clothes get out of my head I know your moves before you make them your hands, up my thighs whisper sweet nothings into my ear bittersweet lies to help pass the time before the sun splashes into your room in-between the blinds, reminding me once again you cannot make a home out of a human.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/27/2014 8:00:00 PM
DAKOTA, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 8/24/2014 11:16:00 AM
Dakota, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 8/24/2014 7:44:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Dakota - I choose your first good written free verse - Well done - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/23/2014 11:32:00 PM
Dakota,this is such a deep powerful inspirational write! Bravo! A warm welcome to PoetrySoup and happy writings! Pandita
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Date: 8/24/2014 12:33:00 AM
thank you very much for the welcome and the positive feedback :-)

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