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He Comes Secretly

Beaded tresses and silk kimono rustle with finesse,
Her geisha heels tapping restlessly on moist Yakasa weeds
From  an enchi...there he comes secretly, through groans of monks’ bells


*enchi---Japanese garden


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Brian Strand

Copyright © Nette Onclaud | Year Posted 2013

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Janis Medders Tobechi Date: 6/4/2017 11:02:00 PM This is all so mystic and beautiful. Wonderful Eastern images. Congratulations on your high placement. Login to Reply

Gregory Richard Barden Date: 6/3/2017 3:25:00 AM I love this, Nette, the rhythm and tone, and I have always been fascinated with Japanese culture ... wonderful work, and congrats on your win! :-) Login to Reply

Dean Wood Date: 6/2/2017 11:47:00 PM Very pretty Nette. Congratulations on your high placement with this beauty. - Dean Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 6/2/2017 10:06:00 PM Love this, Nette! Login to Reply

Danesh Morgan Date: 9/8/2013 9:28:00 PM splendid Congrats on your win. Morgan Login to Reply

Olusegun Arowolo Date: 9/8/2013 9:46:00 AM Awesome piece,Superb write......Congrats on your win,Nette... Login to Reply

Shadow Hamilton Date: 9/8/2013 5:34:00 AM super poem Nettie congrats on win Shadow x smile Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 9/7/2013 9:04:00 PM Congratulations, Nette, in Debbie's awesome contest....... SKAT Login to Reply

Sandra Adams Date: 9/7/2013 7:47:00 PM just love this poem of yours...congrats on your win with this outstanding poem! Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 9/7/2013 6:38:00 PM One wants to tiptoe through your poem! Congratulations, Nette! Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 9/7/2013 5:54:00 PM I could feel the softness of the ground! How cool is that! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 9/7/2013 5:36:00 AM Congrats on the win Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 9/7/2013 4:55:00 AM nette..l9ve the win....pd Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/6/2013 10:57:00 PM wowie, zowie, THIS is so awesome. So far I am loving Deb's lineup!! (glad I even got on the list with yours and Carrie's at the top being so great!) Congrats. Login to Reply

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 9/6/2013 7:28:00 PM Congratulations nette xx Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 9/6/2013 5:04:00 PM Beautiful! Congratulations. Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 9/6/2013 2:53:00 PM Congrats on your great win..Sara Login to Reply

Cherie Thomas Date: 8/27/2013 12:01:00 PM I like this form, very lovely read....cherie Login to Reply

Lucilla Carrillo Date: 8/25/2013 11:36:00 AM This is nice. I think that to walk softly - only geishas have the art to do that. Are the Geishas still around? love the poem thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest...... Lucilla Login to Reply

Wayland Bunch Date: 8/25/2013 7:41:00 AM Nice I think I am even inclined to check this form out. Good work. Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 8/20/2013 1:55:00 PM Nette, this is a beautiful Sijo Poem, well done and I want to thank you so much for selecting my poem Painted Horses Leaping in your Carousel In Roundel Contest for 2nd place, I am so honoured. Constance Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 8/20/2013 1:54:00 PM Phillipines is very nearer to Japan:))This is a wonderful Sijo Nette.Love this. Login to Reply

Chris Boskovski Date: 8/19/2013 9:07:00 PM Very well written Poem! I love it, waiting for your love in secret, awsome, a Japanese Romeo and Juliet I presume! Great poem! from your fellow poet.... Christopher :) Login to Reply

Charmaine Chircop Date: 8/19/2013 4:33:00 PM Deborah is going to fall in love with this beauty..Im sure : ) Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/19/2013 3:39:00 PM wow,this is one of the best I've seen. One sure to please DEBS!! thanks for my place in your contest, Nette. I read all the winning poems. So many good ones you inspired. Login to Reply

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