Ankita Acharjee Poet ABC

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He begins his day with my smile
Sending me a message and wishing “GOOD MORNING”.
He passes his day remembering the face of mine
Asking me to give his love.
He does not think of anything,
But wipes away all my tear,
All the day long I torture him,
But he treats me like a dear.
I give him sorrow of every kind,
But he takes them granted
Saying how much he loves me,
Giving me the care that I wanted.
I do love him with no regret
But he is the person I will never get.

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Anne-Lise Andresen November 17, 2015 at 12:19 PM - Hey Ankita :) - A lovely time to start in an poetry club, autumn and winter is a time we spend a lot of time inside our homes - More time to read and write poetry - I wish you an enjoyable time and warm welcome :) -Thanks for your great first poem - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :) Ankita Acharjee November 17, 2015 at 1:08 PM Thank you very much...and please give suggestions if there is any mistake....or to improve my poems...:)

Kenisha Shines November 17, 2015 at 9:07 AM WELCOME to poetry soup.Hope you both get love and be together.stay blessed :)

Poet Destroyer A November 16, 2015 at 11:12 PM Ankita, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Pandita Sietesantos November 15, 2015 at 12:41 PM Hi Ankita, this is such an excellent first posted piece that makes me look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7! Pandita

Skat A November 15, 2015 at 8:12 AM Ankita,, , Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT