Hcd

Part of the denominator,
extraordinary matters level off
and find the lowest trough.
So-called excellence will
joust with the buffooner,
and they are wrestling still.

In days of yore the seer
would declaim the truth, 
accepted by the old, the youth,
whereas for now the spirits mill,  
are we shackled, are we freer,
hungry now our mouths to fill?

Time will not stand for surety,
the prophet's exclamation gone to dust,
while totems crumble, metals turn to rust,
we try to compromise, a bitter pill
for those who crave acerbity
and swear our bliss to spill.

Were we to strike good earth,
avoid all roiling undulation,
seek and hold a firm foundation,
and ascend the highest hill,
then would excellence be realised for all its worth, 
and our hopes and dreams we would fulfill.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Wesley Avatar
May 27, 2012 at 6:49 PM
Such an unusual but effective rhyme scheme; it is a welcome departure from the usual with a great story. Luv, Lizabeth
Guzzi Avatar
October 1, 2010 at 9:01 AM
a most excellent write and use of metaphor and yes would we want to win at all if it were so easy a path to the goal would it mean anything...I think not. Light & Love
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August 21, 2009 at 6:16 PM
Powerful poem for the reader to reflect on. I like the vivid imagery. Keep up the good writing. Karen
Brown Avatar
August 21, 2009 at 3:36 PM
Here we are at the end of the week again. I am reading some excellent poetry today. Thank you for sharing yours with us Keith. Love, Carol
Kendrick Avatar
August 21, 2009 at 10:55 AM
Interesting writing. Keep writing. Sara
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