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Hazy Like Mist

Hazy
remembrances
wither  in dim corners--
our laughter not  kept through night’s edge
and yet…
panes  rustling from ardor’s downfall
mirror your bare outline,
your scent wafting
like mist.



For Jenish Somadas' Contest
Let the Pens Flow--Butterfly Cinquain
5/9/2020

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Eve Roper Date: 6/6/2020 12:05:00 AM Beautiful verse, Nette, your pen is like a brush on the canvas a painting . Hugs Eve Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 5/18/2020 6:40:00 AM beautifully sensual Nette, Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply

Sam Kauffman Date: 5/14/2020 10:40:00 PM Lovely romatic image, Nette - such a vivid picture. Congratulations on your win! Hope you are well. Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 5/14/2020 3:26:00 PM Wow, Very lovely Nette, Congrats on your win Login to Reply

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 5/14/2020 2:48:00 PM You have not lost your magical touch dear Nette, congratulation on your winning poetry. Hope you are keeping well, xo Login to Reply

Jenish Somadas Date: 5/14/2020 9:25:00 AM Beautifully penned.. Congrats on your great win Nette... Login to Reply

Aditi Mishra Date: 5/14/2020 5:19:00 AM "scent wafting like mist"....no wonder the beautiful image lingers in the memory. Congratulations on your win Nette :) Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/11/2020 8:39:00 PM fantastic imagery Nette. You are back in top form! Login to Reply

Gershon Wolf Date: 5/10/2020 6:53:00 PM Well, well, well! What a pleasure to see a poem from nette! Wonderful, as always. Welcome back!! Cheers, Gershon Login to Reply

Jc Hawkens Date: 5/10/2020 6:40:00 PM Beautiful.. Lovely poetry with a wonderful sentiment. Your Romantic Cinquain poem went into my Favs. Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 5/10/2020 11:07:00 AM Nette, beautiful, your poem has such a dreamy quality, I wanted it to go on, A FAV- Constance Login to Reply

Silent One Date: 5/10/2020 10:40:00 AM Hey welcome back.. Nice to see you posting again.. Hope you are well.. Login to Reply

Suzanne Delaney Date: 5/9/2020 2:23:00 PM Wonderful, sensual as only you can write it. Nice to see you here once more. Luv, SuZ Login to Reply

Edward Ibeh Date: 5/9/2020 2:01:00 PM Ah, the great poetess is back! I missed you, Nette:-) Loved your poem. Congrats on your win! Login to Reply

Ralph Sergi Date: 5/9/2020 1:54:00 PM Welcome back, nette! As always , a very romantically poetic refrain done well. Check out my new poem! Hope everythingis well. Login to Reply

Robert L. Hinshaw Date: 5/9/2020 11:35:00 AM Been wondering where you been! Great to see you back, nette! Hope to enjoy more of your wonderful writes - Bob Login to Reply

Charlie Smith Date: 5/9/2020 11:22:00 AM You've been missed Dear Nette, great comeback write, best wishes... Login to Reply

Vijay Pandit Date: 5/9/2020 7:10:00 AM Welcome back after a long break. Beautiful, meaningful write, as always. All the best. Login to Reply

Mike Gentile Date: 5/9/2020 6:53:00 AM Hi Nette, I love your Cinquain! I feel it.' Good luck xxoo Login to Reply

Caren Krutsinger Date: 5/9/2020 6:04:00 AM Beautiful pen flow. Great! Login to Reply

Tom Cunningham Date: 5/9/2020 5:50:00 AM Nette, how lovely to see you, you've been missed, hope you are well. Nice to see you writing again. Tom. Login to Reply

Lawrence Sharp Date: 5/9/2020 1:36:00 AM Very moody, very sensual; great write. Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 5/9/2020 1:16:00 AM Beautiful, Nette, I glad to see you back. Hugs Eve Login to Reply

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 5/8/2020 11:05:00 PM love left, ethereal, gorgeous ink x Login to Reply