Nette Onclaud Poet Cinquain

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Hazy Like Mist

Hazy
remembrances
wither  in dim corners--
our laughter not  kept through night’s edge
and yet…
panes  rustling from ardor’s downfall
mirror your bare outline,
your scent wafting
like mist.



For Jenish Somadas' Contest
Let the Pens Flow--Butterfly Cinquain
5/9/2020

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Eve Roper June 6, 2020 at 12:05 AM Beautiful verse, Nette, your pen is like a brush on the canvas a painting . Hugs Eve

Jan Allison May 18, 2020 at 6:40 AM beautifully sensual Nette, Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Sam Kauffman May 14, 2020 at 10:40 PM Lovely romatic image, Nette - such a vivid picture. Congratulations on your win! Hope you are well.

Joseph May May 14, 2020 at 3:26 PM Wow, Very lovely Nette, Congrats on your win

Mystic Rose Rose May 14, 2020 at 2:48 PM You have not lost your magical touch dear Nette, congratulation on your winning poetry. Hope you are keeping well, xo

Jenish Somadas May 14, 2020 at 9:25 AM Beautifully penned.. Congrats on your great win Nette...

Aditi Mishra May 14, 2020 at 5:19 AM "scent wafting like mist"....no wonder the beautiful image lingers in the memory. Congratulations on your win Nette :)

Andrea Dietrich May 11, 2020 at 8:39 PM fantastic imagery Nette. You are back in top form!

Gershon Wolf May 10, 2020 at 6:53 PM Well, well, well! What a pleasure to see a poem from nette! Wonderful, as always. Welcome back!! Cheers, Gershon

Jc Hawkens May 10, 2020 at 6:40 PM Beautiful.. Lovely poetry with a wonderful sentiment. Your Romantic Cinquain poem went into my Favs.

Constance La France May 10, 2020 at 11:07 AM Nette, beautiful, your poem has such a dreamy quality, I wanted it to go on, A FAV- Constance

Silent One May 10, 2020 at 10:40 AM Hey welcome back.. Nice to see you posting again.. Hope you are well..

Suzanne Delaney May 9, 2020 at 2:23 PM Wonderful, sensual as only you can write it. Nice to see you here once more. Luv, SuZ

Edward Ibeh May 9, 2020 at 2:01 PM Ah, the great poetess is back! I missed you, Nette:-) Loved your poem. Congrats on your win!

Ralph Sergi May 9, 2020 at 1:54 PM Welcome back, nette! As always , a very romantically poetic refrain done well. Check out my new poem! Hope everythingis well.

Robert L. Hinshaw May 9, 2020 at 11:35 AM Been wondering where you been! Great to see you back, nette! Hope to enjoy more of your wonderful writes - Bob

Charlie Smith May 9, 2020 at 11:22 AM You've been missed Dear Nette, great comeback write, best wishes...

Vijay Pandit May 9, 2020 at 7:10 AM Welcome back after a long break. Beautiful, meaningful write, as always. All the best.

Mike Gentile May 9, 2020 at 6:53 AM Hi Nette, I love your Cinquain! I feel it.' Good luck xxoo

Caren Krutsinger May 9, 2020 at 6:04 AM Beautiful pen flow. Great!

Tom Cunningham May 9, 2020 at 5:50 AM Nette, how lovely to see you, you've been missed, hope you are well. Nice to see you writing again. Tom.

Lawrence Sharp May 9, 2020 at 1:36 AM Very moody, very sensual; great write.

Eve Roper May 9, 2020 at 1:16 AM Beautiful, Nette, I glad to see you back. Hugs Eve

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart May 8, 2020 at 11:05 PM love left, ethereal, gorgeous ink x