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Hazy remembrances wither in dim corners-- our laughter not kept through night’s edge and yet… panes rustling from ardor’s downfall mirror your bare outline, your scent wafting like mist. For Jenish Somadas' Contest Let the Pens Flow--Butterfly Cinquain 5/9/2020

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Date: 6/6/2020 12:05:00 AM
Beautiful verse, Nette, your pen is like a brush on the canvas a painting . Hugs Eve
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Date: 5/18/2020 6:40:00 AM
beautifully sensual Nette, Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/14/2020 10:40:00 PM
Lovely romatic image, Nette - such a vivid picture. Congratulations on your win! Hope you are well.
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Date: 5/14/2020 3:26:00 PM
Wow, Very lovely Nette, Congrats on your win
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Date: 5/14/2020 2:48:00 PM
You have not lost your magical touch dear Nette, congratulation on your winning poetry. Hope you are keeping well, xo
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Date: 5/14/2020 9:25:00 AM
Beautifully penned.. Congrats on your great win Nette...
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Date: 5/14/2020 5:19:00 AM
"scent wafting like mist"....no wonder the beautiful image lingers in the memory. Congratulations on your win Nette :)
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Date: 5/11/2020 8:39:00 PM
fantastic imagery Nette. You are back in top form!
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Date: 5/10/2020 6:53:00 PM
Well, well, well! What a pleasure to see a poem from nette! Wonderful, as always. Welcome back!! Cheers, Gershon
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Date: 5/10/2020 6:40:00 PM
Beautiful.. Lovely poetry with a wonderful sentiment. Your Romantic Cinquain poem went into my Favs.
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Date: 5/10/2020 11:07:00 AM
Nette, beautiful, your poem has such a dreamy quality, I wanted it to go on, A FAV- Constance
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Date: 5/10/2020 10:40:00 AM
Hey welcome back.. Nice to see you posting again.. Hope you are well..
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Date: 5/9/2020 2:23:00 PM
Wonderful, sensual as only you can write it. Nice to see you here once more. Luv, SuZ
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Date: 5/9/2020 2:01:00 PM
Ah, the great poetess is back! I missed you, Nette:-) Loved your poem. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 5/9/2020 1:54:00 PM
Welcome back, nette! As always , a very romantically poetic refrain done well. Check out my new poem! Hope everythingis well.
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Date: 5/9/2020 11:35:00 AM
Been wondering where you been! Great to see you back, nette! Hope to enjoy more of your wonderful writes - Bob
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Date: 5/9/2020 11:22:00 AM
You've been missed Dear Nette, great comeback write, best wishes...
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Date: 5/9/2020 7:10:00 AM
Welcome back after a long break. Beautiful, meaningful write, as always. All the best.
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Date: 5/9/2020 6:53:00 AM
Hi Nette, I love your Cinquain! I feel it.' Good luck xxoo
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Date: 5/9/2020 6:04:00 AM
Beautiful pen flow. Great!
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Date: 5/9/2020 5:50:00 AM
Nette, how lovely to see you, you've been missed, hope you are well. Nice to see you writing again. Tom.
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Date: 5/9/2020 1:36:00 AM
Very moody, very sensual; great write.
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Date: 5/9/2020 1:16:00 AM
Beautiful, Nette, I glad to see you back. Hugs Eve
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Date: 5/8/2020 11:05:00 PM
love left, ethereal, gorgeous ink x
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