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Hazy remembrances wither in dim corners-- our laughter not kept through night’s edge and yet… panes rustling from ardor’s downfall mirror your bare outline, your scent wafting like mist. For Jenish Somadas' Contest Let the Pens Flow--Butterfly Cinquain 5/9/2020

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Eve Roper

Date: 6/6/2020 12:05:00 AM

Beautiful verse, Nette, your pen is like a brush on the canvas a painting . Hugs Eve

Jan Allison

Date: 5/18/2020 6:40:00 AM

beautifully sensual Nette, Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/14/2020 10:40:00 PM

Lovely romatic image, Nette - such a vivid picture. Congratulations on your win! Hope you are well.

Joseph May

Date: 5/14/2020 3:26:00 PM

Wow, Very lovely Nette, Congrats on your win

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 5/14/2020 2:48:00 PM

You have not lost your magical touch dear Nette, congratulation on your winning poetry. Hope you are keeping well, xo

Jenish Somadas

Date: 5/14/2020 9:25:00 AM

Beautifully penned.. Congrats on your great win Nette...

Aditi Mishra

Date: 5/14/2020 5:19:00 AM

"scent wafting like mist"....no wonder the beautiful image lingers in the memory. Congratulations on your win Nette :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/11/2020 8:39:00 PM

fantastic imagery Nette. You are back in top form!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/10/2020 6:53:00 PM

Well, well, well! What a pleasure to see a poem from nette! Wonderful, as always. Welcome back!! Cheers, Gershon

Jc Hawkens

Date: 5/10/2020 6:40:00 PM

Beautiful.. Lovely poetry with a wonderful sentiment. Your Romantic Cinquain poem went into my Favs.

Constance La France

Date: 5/10/2020 11:07:00 AM

Nette, beautiful, your poem has such a dreamy quality, I wanted it to go on, A FAV- Constance

Silent One

Date: 5/10/2020 10:40:00 AM

Hey welcome back.. Nice to see you posting again.. Hope you are well..

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 5/9/2020 2:23:00 PM

Wonderful, sensual as only you can write it. Nice to see you here once more. Luv, SuZ

Edward Ibeh

Date: 5/9/2020 2:01:00 PM

Ah, the great poetess is back! I missed you, Nette:-) Loved your poem. Congrats on your win!

Ralph Sergi

Date: 5/9/2020 1:54:00 PM

Welcome back, nette! As always , a very romantically poetic refrain done well. Check out my new poem! Hope everythingis well.

Robert L. Hinshaw

Date: 5/9/2020 11:35:00 AM

Been wondering where you been! Great to see you back, nette! Hope to enjoy more of your wonderful writes - Bob

Charlie Smith

Date: 5/9/2020 11:22:00 AM

You've been missed Dear Nette, great comeback write, best wishes...

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/9/2020 7:10:00 AM

Welcome back after a long break. Beautiful, meaningful write, as always. All the best.

Mike Gentile

Date: 5/9/2020 6:53:00 AM

Hi Nette, I love your Cinquain! I feel it.' Good luck xxoo

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/9/2020 6:04:00 AM

Beautiful pen flow. Great!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/9/2020 5:50:00 AM

Nette, how lovely to see you, you've been missed, hope you are well. Nice to see you writing again. Tom.

Lawrence Sharp

Date: 5/9/2020 1:36:00 AM

Very moody, very sensual; great write.

Eve Roper

Date: 5/9/2020 1:16:00 AM

Beautiful, Nette, I glad to see you back. Hugs Eve

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 5/8/2020 11:05:00 PM

love left, ethereal, gorgeous ink x