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Hazel And Laughter

A bed of rose petals Hazel sprawls bed started collapsing then falls bridegroom heated with anger then looked at each in laughter she wanted pickles and ice cream balls ©5/21/2015 Contest Name: L&H Limericks Sponsor: Catie Lindsey

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Date: 5/30/2015 7:11:00 PM
Clever and amusing write Eve, Hugs
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Date: 5/24/2015 6:11:00 PM
Pickles already?? hahaha. Love it, sweetie!!
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Eve Roper
Date: 5/29/2015 5:48:00 PM
:~) butter milk was mine and I hated butter milk at the time
Date: 5/22/2015 11:14:00 PM
Lol!!!!!! Excellent write, I love this great limerick.......good luck in the contest.........Afolabi.
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Eve Roper
Date: 5/29/2015 5:48:00 PM
Thank you, Afolabi, :~) hugs
Date: 5/22/2015 1:43:00 AM
made me giggle Eve and the pregnancy comments made me laugh even more - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx 7
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Eve Roper
Date: 5/22/2015 12:23:00 PM
If I made you giggle then I did something right. Everyone harase me because I never get the joke. I don't have a sense of humor so I do try :~)
Date: 5/22/2015 1:01:00 AM
Oh, she is obviously with child!!! :)
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Eve Roper
Date: 5/22/2015 12:20:00 PM
Hello Dave, Of course she is with child, my flavor was ice and lots of it and buttermilk doughnuts and I hated buttermilk
Date: 5/21/2015 5:33:00 PM
Eve, this is a good one, 7, and thanks for visiting my poetry
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Eve Roper
Date: 5/21/2015 6:23:00 PM
thank you B.W., the visities to your home are always wonderful