Eve Roper Poet Limerick

Hazel and Laughter

A bed of rose petals  Hazel sprawls
bed started  collapsing then falls
bridegroom heated with anger
then looked at each in  laughter
she wanted pickles  and ice cream balls


©5/21/2015

Contest Name: L&H Limericks 
Sponsor: Catie Lindsey

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Cecilia Macfarlane May 30, 2015 at 7:11 PM Clever and amusing write Eve, Hugs

Andrea Dietrich May 24, 2015 at 6:11 PM Pickles already?? hahaha. Love it, sweetie!! Eve Roper May 29, 2015 at 5:48 PM :~) butter milk was mine and I hated butter milk at the time

Afolabi Muideen May 22, 2015 at 11:14 PM Lol!!!!!! Excellent write, I love this great limerick.......good luck in the contest.........Afolabi. Eve Roper May 29, 2015 at 5:48 PM Thank you, Afolabi, :~) hugs

Jan Allison May 22, 2015 at 1:43 AM made me giggle Eve and the pregnancy comments made me laugh even more - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx 7 Eve Roper May 22, 2015 at 12:23 PM If I made you giggle then I did something right. Everyone harase me because I never get the joke. I don't have a sense of humor so I do try :~)

Constance La France May 21, 2015 at 5:33 PM Eve, this is a good one, 7, and thanks for visiting my poetry Eve Roper May 21, 2015 at 6:23 PM thank you B.W., the visities to your home are always wonderful