Barbara Gorelick Poet Acrostic

Hay Ride

Hanging on tightly over bumps along the way
Around the barn and through the fields we sway
Young ones chatter, laugh and play

Rusty red, the autumn hills are grand
Inspire words to write about the land
Delightful afternoon , my heart sings
Enjoying the warmth that autumn brings


8/30/12

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Jon A Cavanaugh September 12, 2012 at 10:09 PM Another lovely poem from you. Oh, and to respond to question how does one post 5 poems a day. The answer: Vacation, Vacation, Vacation. They are too few and too short. But, your colorful autumn poem makes me long for more

Ralph Mason September 9, 2012 at 9:13 PM enjoyed your poem. brings back memories of sitting on the top of the hay wagon:) Warm thoughts, Ralph

Jack Horne September 4, 2012 at 2:31 PM love this lovely acrostic, Barbara - I've never been on a hay ride but it sounds wonderful. Congrats on all your wins : )

George Aul September 1, 2012 at 10:22 AM Great picture - Great season...... George

Harry Horsman September 1, 2012 at 8:18 AM wonderful Acrostic, Barbara, so poetic.

Nette Onclaud August 31, 2012 at 1:00 PM i feel carried on a wave of melodious language and the beauty of autumn's hay-delight makes me dizzy.... well done, barbara..:) huggs!

Andrea Dietrich August 31, 2012 at 12:28 PM what a nice way to do an acrostic on the fall. I only had a few hay rides and they were not what I had envisioned romantically, but they were fun!

Cindy Cayton August 31, 2012 at 11:37 AM Nice one! :) take care and God bless you, uch Love, Cindy