Hawk In Flight

hawk in flight graceful angular wings spread... death awaits field rat

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 10/27/2013 4:48:00 PM
I love poems about animals. Great Haiku.
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Date: 10/26/2012 9:16:00 PM
WOW WHAT AN AWESOME IMAGE SARA .. A LITTLE SCARY FOR THE FIELD RAT TOO LUV ..
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Date: 10/26/2012 9:01:00 AM
nature as it is, Sara, you highlight it so well, love this............
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Date: 10/25/2012 10:19:00 AM
Awesome! I could see the scene unfolding.
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Date: 10/25/2012 7:53:00 AM
another good one! i can just picture this...
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Date: 10/25/2012 7:38:00 AM
Too bad for that field rat cause I just know that the hawk will win that battle...they usually do! We watch them outside our house catching field mice here too! We had to be extra careful taking our puppy out when he had to use the bathroom...he was so small he could have been taken by one of those hawks, but with us there they don't try! I really enjoyed reading this masterfully created poem this morning! What a delightful piece my friend, Great Work!!
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Date: 10/25/2012 6:18:00 AM
Lol, yes. Good meal. On it goes. Awesome Haiku, Sara. Have a wonderful, fun filled day. Love ya, Toquyen
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