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...Hawaii's Fireworks

Hawaii's fireworks
red white and blue sparks in air
volcano exploding

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Carolyn Devonshire

July 6, 2010 at 12:51 PM

Oh my! How creative, Marie. Congrats on your win! Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

July 6, 2010 at 8:31 AM

Congratulations Marie on your win in Deborah Guzzi's contest "Fireworks". Love, Carol

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

July 6, 2010 at 1:58 AM

I loved that last line! Gave it a different feel--congrats, Marie :) --nikko :)

Andrea Dietrich

July 5, 2010 at 1:43 PM

Gosh, I am surprised this one is not coming from Linda over there in Hawaii right now! Do ou live in Hawaii? That would be so cool. Congratulations! LUv,Andrea

Elaine George

July 5, 2010 at 9:36 AM

I would love to see them. Lovely Haiku, dear Constance. Congratulaions on your in in Deborah's contest. Love, Lainie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

July 4, 2010 at 6:43 PM

Congrats Marie on your HM for your Haiku in the Fireworks contest ..with a bit of Hawaii I see .. for four nights now I see them.. enjoy your honor as u celebrate in style.. on the 4th of July.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii.. AlohA...

July 4, 2010 at 4:33 PM

Just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on your win in Deborah's contest to my other comment. Enjoy your success. I wish you many more. Karen

James Fraser

July 3, 2010 at 10:55 AM

Wow Marie, this is a scene I would love to see, wonderful Haiku >> James

July 3, 2010 at 10:30 AM

Good use of imagery. Interesting analogy between the first and last lines. Best wishes in the contest. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen

Debbie Guzzi

July 3, 2010 at 6:28 AM

okies Marie just put the 3 dots BEFORE the word volcano in the title line all else is as request and now we just judge content and not form! BIG HUGS!

Debbie Guzzi

July 3, 2010 at 6:01 AM

I really love the unusual take on the subject! pretty please with sugar NO punctuation NO capitalization NO title. in the title line you put ...volcano explodes Light & Love