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Hawaiian Punch

volcanoes
evolution erupting
hawaiian punch

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Andrea Dietrich

January 29, 2011 at 3:43 PM

Very interesting one!! the word play so cute.

James Fraser

January 21, 2011 at 6:20 PM

And punch is what they do Deb. Nature at her evil best, but beautiful in it's own right....:)

Robert Pettit

January 21, 2011 at 8:30 AM

If Mt. Etna or Mt. Vesuvius erupts, would we call it an Italian Punch? Good haiku Deb.

Christopher Marcum

January 19, 2011 at 11:03 AM

this is an interesting poe for a few years ago; around three or four, maybe five; i had a vivid dream about Hawaii being swallowed up by a tidal wave of immense and epic proportions; which makes this canvas sooo very intriguing -- nice painting; bold in colours -- love, christopher