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Hawaiian Punch

volcanoes evolution erupting hawaiian punch

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/29/2011 3:43:00 PM

Very interesting one!! the word play so cute.

James Fraser

Date: 1/21/2011 6:20:00 PM

And punch is what they do Deb. Nature at her evil best, but beautiful in it's own right....:)

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/21/2011 8:30:00 AM

If Mt. Etna or Mt. Vesuvius erupts, would we call it an Italian Punch? Good haiku Deb.

Christopher Marcum

Date: 1/19/2011 11:03:00 AM

this is an interesting poe for a few years ago; around three or four, maybe five; i had a vivid dream about Hawaii being swallowed up by a tidal wave of immense and epic proportions; which makes this canvas sooo very intriguing -- nice painting; bold in colours -- love, christopher

John Freeman

Date: 1/19/2011 10:33:00 AM

This is Good, Deb. Excellent! Agape, Moses