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Hawai'I Nei

The Bible says I'm destined to die For the life of me, I don't know why My mortgage is paid! Its time I got lei'd! Why on earth should I just bid, "Goodbye"?

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Date: 5/8/2019 8:30:00 PM
Yeah, you're right! You're not Willy Loman. ('Free at last. Free at last!' … and kaput. LOL. You deserve to live and enjoy! Go for it, Rico. ~ gw
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Date: 5/8/2019 4:23:00 PM
You live in Hawaii with a paid-off mortgage - you are one of the lucky ones!
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Date: 5/8/2019 8:00:00 AM
Lol! Clever indeed ;D xomo!
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Date: 5/7/2019 7:29:00 PM
Clever, clever, clever!
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