Hawai'I Nei

The Bible says I'm destined to die
For the life of me, I don't know why
My mortgage is paid!
Its time I got lei'd!
Why on earth should I just bid, "Goodbye"?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Wolf Avatar
May 8, 2019 at 8:30 PM
Yeah, you're right! You're not Willy Loman. ('Free at last. Free at last!' … and kaput. LOL. You deserve to live and enjoy! Go for it, Rico. ~ gw
Faulkner Avatar
May 8, 2019 at 4:23 PM
You live in Hawaii with a paid-off mortgage - you are one of the lucky ones!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 8, 2019 at 8:00 AM
Lol! Clever indeed ;D xomo!
Awtry Avatar
May 7, 2019 at 7:29 PM
Clever, clever, clever!
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