Hawaii-My Favorite Destination

Palm trees in the pineapple breeze, c a l m chameleon ocean up to my knees- Beach sands with pebbles in my hands, oh, to not return to the Michigan's freeze. HAWAII ways as the mountain sprays, wearing pink lays as the sun f a d e s- I miss that warm sun and surfing fun, jewelry stands with hues of turquoise and jade. Honeymoon vacation, my favorite destination, what a b e a u t i f u l creation God has made- A trip across the Pacific, KAWAII to be specific, with corner markets to buy, sell and trade. Mai Tai in my hand while on this beautiful land, you have to see this island of g r a c e- You’d understand with your feet in the sand, within my husband’s warm e m b r a c e. Got some good rest, completely impressed with the luau that hot Saturday night- now I digress and I must sincerely confess, HAWAII is the most b e a u t i f u l sight. I wish to go return with hard money earned, but I’ll leave it as my f a v o r i t e vacation- I have seen HAWAII'S beauty and gradually learned, some memories should be a one-time celebration. April 24, 2017

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 4/24/2017 11:40:00 AM
Now I want to go there. Your description looks like heaven Laura.
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Date: 4/24/2017 9:41:00 AM
I so want to go there. I can only go there in my mind...Great poem and your rhyme scheme was nice as well.
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