Having Witnessed

My eyes now captured Pertness shaped enticing me Bloused now aroused Thumb and finger now linger Their captivity beckons .
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Kendrick Avatar
March 15, 2015 at 5:46 PM
Creative way to go with this passionate work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Fraser Avatar
March 15, 2015 at 5:49 PM
Thank you Sara, your comments are always appreciated, James :)
Devonshire Avatar
March 15, 2015 at 1:15 PM
Simmering with passion, dear James. What a gift you have for arousing romantic feelings! Love, Carolyn
Fraser Avatar
March 15, 2015 at 5:09 PM
Thank you kindly Carolyn. The wandering mind of a Highlander putting thoughts to paper, hugs//James :) :)
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
March 15, 2015 at 2:52 AM
well, Dino James, summer is starting... :)! //olive eloisa
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
March 16, 2015 at 7:42 AM
well I mean your poem beats a summery heat James.. :)! weeeeeeeee!! blossom amidst the blossoms.. :)! i like that.. :)! I never experienced winter yet.. :) someday maybe.. :O! //olive eloisa
Fraser Avatar
March 15, 2015 at 7:43 AM
Summer will follow, but Spring surely has arrived, for blossoms will soon paint some beautiful scenes. No better scene than a blossom amidst the blossoms Oliz, soon I'll see my words every season, hugs//James xx
Lindley Avatar
March 15, 2015 at 12:12 AM
This Tanka speaks volumes my friend. A7 and a matching picture would have been too much for some of us to handle!
Fraser Avatar
March 15, 2015 at 9:42 AM
Indeed Robert, no image required. I'll let the readers create their own ;-) blessed Sunday to you my friend, James :) :)
A  Avatar
March 14, 2015 at 9:19 PM
thank you for sharing this moment. SKAT
Fraser Avatar
March 15, 2015 at 9:36 AM
Hiya SKAT, many thanks for your visit, hugs//James :)
Chircop Avatar
March 14, 2015 at 5:52 PM
An enticing and sensual tanka James.Happy Weekend!
Fraser Avatar
March 14, 2015 at 6:03 PM
Hiya Charmaine, overactive mind again ;-) happy weekend to you also, hugs//James :) :)
Allison Avatar
March 14, 2015 at 5:27 PM
beautifully sensual James:-) hugs Jan xx 7 xx
Allison Avatar
March 14, 2015 at 6:10 PM
Why start now James - it's simply too late lol! :-) Hugs Jan xx
Fraser Avatar
March 14, 2015 at 5:58 PM
Haha, I'll need to behave Jan, erm!! no ;-) hugs//James xx
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