Haven of the Night

. Surround black consume Sand surf water, shell escaped Haven of the night

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Gert W. Knop

Date: 5/10/2010 8:19:00 AM

Enjoyed reading this Haiku today, Sara, it let me think of past days when walking along the beach. Thank you for your comments and have a great time...Gert

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 4/25/2010 2:14:00 PM

Interesting Haiky, Sarah, well written and great imagery. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes, Caroline.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 4/24/2010 7:05:00 PM

makes me want to go to the beach.

Faleshia Murphy

Date: 4/24/2010 11:27:00 AM

very nice write enjoyed it and thank you for all your comments and support faleshia86

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/24/2010 10:17:00 AM

Awesome image of the sea at night, Sara! Very nice haiku. Love, Carolyn