Richard Lamoureux Poet Rhyme

Have You Seen My Carflufflemoose

I wish to find my Carflufflemoose
He's smaller than a duck
With a long neck like a goose
Please tell me yes 
Oh tell me please
Have you seen one disguised as a trampolease.
He hops like a bunny
Bouncing quite high
A truly talented  Carflufflemoose
He can fly high in the sky
To tell you the truth 
You may be wondering why
His belly is so fat and he has purple eyes

He might be a bird
Though not one very wise 
An owl like demenor 
In parrot disguise!
With yellow contacts in those purple eyes
if you want to catch him offer him fries
Once I'm reunited I'll give you a prize 
Look real careful
He loves riding a red caboose 
He's really quite harmless 
Still he shouldn't be on the loose
After all he's a Carflufflemoose!


I put away my Dark Suess and came up with this one.
I hope you and Abbie enjoy it Casarah.

By: Richard Lamoureux

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Scott Thirtyseven September 1, 2015 at 7:41 AM What a hoot. A very enjoyable read, thanks for sharing. Richard Lamoureux September 1, 2015 at 8:16 AM Thanks Scott

Dr. Upma A. Sharma August 30, 2015 at 12:38 AM What a great write Richard! Kids sure love these imaginary mooses, congrats on big win! Richard Lamoureux September 1, 2015 at 8:16 AM Thanks Upma

Richard Lamoureux August 29, 2015 at 2:55 PM Thanks Barbara, do you know any good illustrators?? I appreciate the visit and positive comment. Barbara Campbell August 29, 2015 at 5:56 PM Sorry, I don't know of any; maybe other members know of someone. Barbara

Barbara Campbell August 29, 2015 at 2:22 PM Richard, Great use of descriptive language. I think it would be great to see his picture, or have kids read the story and draw their image to post and help find him. Congratulations, Barbara Richard Lamoureux August 29, 2015 at 2:55 PM Oops, comment up above.

Eve Roper August 29, 2015 at 12:09 PM I love this wonderful story I'll try to look for your Carflufflemoose. Hugs Eve Richard Lamoureux August 29, 2015 at 1:42 PM Thanks Eve.

James Inman August 29, 2015 at 11:27 AM Loved it Richard, I'm a huge fan of moose and Carflufflemoose. Richard Lamoureux August 29, 2015 at 1:43 PM Ha ha, thanks James.

Jan Allison August 29, 2015 at 9:12 AM Dropping back with my congratulations Richard:-) hugs Jan xx Richard Lamoureux August 29, 2015 at 9:42 AM Thanks Jan.

Casarah Nance August 29, 2015 at 8:02 AM Any way you seuss it, you seuss it well! :) Casarah Nance August 29, 2015 at 2:33 PM Oh she sure did, that is why you are on the winners list...I sure did get tongue tied reading all these fun poems, thanks again for your writes, you are awesome Richard Lamoureux August 29, 2015 at 9:42 AM I hope Abbey enjoyed it.

Vera Duggan August 24, 2015 at 12:19 AM Oh I do love this one Richard, nice lite hearted poem I am sure Casarah and Abbie will love it, take care..............Vera. Richard Lamoureux August 24, 2015 at 12:50 AM Thanks Vera I hope so as well.

Charmaine Chircop August 23, 2015 at 8:58 PM I have plenty of fries made just for him on my windowsill..I might catch him and hold him for gofood..'Come Carflufflemoose..all kinds of chips are waiting and some Carflufflebooze : ). Entertaining.I love it when you get in this kind of world. Richard Lamoureux August 23, 2015 at 9:12 PM Thanks Charmaine, it is fun to be a bit silly.

Carol Eastman August 23, 2015 at 9:53 AM Loved it! This side of you is FUN!Ought to try it more often! Carol Eastman August 29, 2015 at 2:35 PM You were perfect! Congrats on the win! Richard Lamoureux August 23, 2015 at 9:13 PM Am I too serious???

James Peranteau August 22, 2015 at 10:28 PM This is def...going to mine fav's dear poet ! It will be the first thing that I read to my grandson ! Awesome suess, I mean sir ! Have a wonderful week Richard...much love, james...P.S...ty fer the recnt Congrats Richard Lamoureux August 23, 2015 at 8:03 AM You as well James. I am pleased that you wish to read my poem to your Grand child. Have a look at my Orange crush poems on my website www.wisedummypoet.com they are listed under short stories. Your grandson might enjoy them as well.

Lewis Nyaga August 21, 2015 at 11:26 PM Hello Richard, this is a well composed piece and I like the way it rolls lyrically on the toungue*******Blessings Richard Lamoureux August 22, 2015 at 12:19 AM Thanks Lewis.

M. L. Kiser August 21, 2015 at 3:44 PM Ugh, I think it flew over my house, heading northeast about 5 minutes ago...luv this one! Richard Lamoureux August 22, 2015 at 12:20 AM Ha ha cute, I'm pleased you like it.

Paul Callus August 21, 2015 at 2:19 PM Very entertaining write, Richard! I'm sure the sponsor/s will like it! // paul Richard Lamoureux August 22, 2015 at 12:21 AM Thanks Paul, I hope you are right.

Constance La France August 21, 2015 at 7:01 AM Richard, I have already read this but can I add SPLENDIFOUROUS !!! (Andrea made that word up and I stole it) and thanks for visiting my poem, something not quite right. . . Richard Lamoureux August 22, 2015 at 12:21 AM Thanks Constance, what a great word!

Constance La France August 21, 2015 at 7:00 AM Richard, I have already read this but can I add SPLENDIFOUROUS !!! (Andrea made that word up and I stole it) and thanks for visiting my poem, something not quite right. . .

Arthur Vaso August 20, 2015 at 6:33 PM I own a rusty 2003 carflufflemoose, just pray you dont have to ride in it! :) Great poem! Richard Lamoureux August 22, 2015 at 12:22 AM You kill me Arthur. Thanks for the chuckle.

Harry Horsman August 20, 2015 at 4:37 PM Well i certainly enjoyed this Richard... Richard Lamoureux August 22, 2015 at 12:22 AM Thanks Harry.

Andrea Dietrich August 19, 2015 at 9:27 PM YOU DID IT. You made a very creative Seuss story. OH I HOPE I CAN DO IT TOO!!! Richard Lamoureux August 22, 2015 at 12:24 AM I have no doubt about it Andrea, you will com up with something perfect.

Constance La France August 19, 2015 at 12:04 PM Richard, I think it's superadorable 10+ and thanks for visiting my poem, fluttering gems

Eileen Manassian August 19, 2015 at 11:21 AM Hey, Richard....Please look up Cas's poem...STAY. Oh....it's so beautiful. I just faved it. You've GOT to read it. :) Hugs I should be poem of the MONTH! Richard Lamoureux August 23, 2015 at 9:14 PM It is really excellent!

Kp Nunez August 19, 2015 at 10:14 AM Where might he be? :-))) A guaranteed kids' read, Rick! Delightfully funny, easy on the eye, just the right length and the right touch of light. Thanks for the visit earlier. Would have wanted to read some more but need to rest for a while. hugs! Richard Lamoureux August 22, 2015 at 12:27 AM It was my pleasure to visit Kim. Goodnight.

Demetrios Trifiatis August 19, 2015 at 9:58 AM Entertainingly beautiful and excitingly creative , dear Richard. Good luck! Richard Lamoureux August 21, 2015 at 7:54 AM Thanks Demetrios.

Jan Allison August 18, 2015 at 2:43 PM oh I can see Abbie loving this Richard a great fun write good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx Richard Lamoureux August 19, 2015 at 8:57 AM Thanks Jan! Hugs Rick.

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