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Have you seen my Carflufflemoose

I wish to find my Carflufflemoose
He's smaller than a duck
With a long neck like a goose
Please tell me yes 
Oh tell me please
Have you seen one disguised as a trampolease.
He hops like a bunny
Bouncing quite high
A truly talented  Carflufflemoose
He can fly high in the sky
To tell you the truth 
You may be wondering why
His belly is so fat and he has purple eyes

He might be a bird
Though not one very wise 
An owl like demenor 
In parrot disguise!
With yellow contacts in those purple eyes
if you want to catch him offer him fries
Once I'm reunited I'll give you a prize 
Look real careful
He loves riding a red caboose 
He's really quite harmless 
Still he shouldn't be on the loose
After all he's a Carflufflemoose!


I put away my Dark Suess and came up with this one.
I hope you and Abbie enjoy it Casarah.

By: Richard Lamoureux

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/6/2015 3:38:00 PM
Richard.. I love your take on Cas' second Dr. Seuss contest.. You grab a theme and take it to the next level in this golden winner!
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Date: 9/1/2015 7:41:00 AM
What a hoot. A very enjoyable read, thanks for sharing.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/1/2015 8:16:00 AM
Thanks Scott
Date: 8/30/2015 12:38:00 AM
What a great write Richard! Kids sure love these imaginary mooses, congrats on big win!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/1/2015 8:16:00 AM
Thanks Upma
Date: 8/29/2015 2:55:00 PM
Thanks Barbara, do you know any good illustrators?? I appreciate the visit and positive comment.
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Barbara Campbell
Date: 8/29/2015 5:56:00 PM
Sorry, I don't know of any; maybe other members know of someone. Barbara
Date: 8/29/2015 2:22:00 PM
Richard, Great use of descriptive language. I think it would be great to see his picture, or have kids read the story and draw their image to post and help find him. Congratulations, Barbara
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/29/2015 2:55:00 PM
Oops, comment up above.
Date: 8/29/2015 12:09:00 PM
I love this wonderful story I'll try to look for your Carflufflemoose. Hugs Eve
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/29/2015 1:42:00 PM
Thanks Eve.
Date: 8/29/2015 11:27:00 AM
Loved it Richard, I'm a huge fan of moose and Carflufflemoose.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/29/2015 1:43:00 PM
Ha ha, thanks James.
Date: 8/29/2015 9:12:00 AM
Dropping back with my congratulations Richard:-) hugs Jan xx
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/29/2015 9:42:00 AM
Thanks Jan.
Date: 8/29/2015 8:02:00 AM
Any way you seuss it, you seuss it well! :)
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Casarah Nance
Date: 8/29/2015 2:33:00 PM
Oh she sure did, that is why you are on the winners list...I sure did get tongue tied reading all these fun poems, thanks again for your writes, you are awesome
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/29/2015 9:42:00 AM
I hope Abbey enjoyed it.
Date: 8/24/2015 12:19:00 AM
Oh I do love this one Richard, nice lite hearted poem I am sure Casarah and Abbie will love it, take care..............Vera.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/24/2015 12:50:00 AM
Thanks Vera I hope so as well.
Date: 8/23/2015 8:58:00 PM
I have plenty of fries made just for him on my windowsill..I might catch him and hold him for gofood..'Come Carflufflemoose..all kinds of chips are waiting and some Carflufflebooze : ). Entertaining.I love it when you get in this kind of world.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/23/2015 9:12:00 PM
Thanks Charmaine, it is fun to be a bit silly.
Date: 8/23/2015 9:53:00 AM
Loved it! This side of you is FUN!Ought to try it more often!
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Carol Eastman
Date: 8/29/2015 2:35:00 PM
You were perfect! Congrats on the win!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/23/2015 9:13:00 PM
Am I too serious???
Date: 8/22/2015 10:28:00 PM
This is def...going to mine fav's dear poet ! It will be the first thing that I read to my grandson ! Awesome suess, I mean sir ! Have a wonderful week Richard...much love, james...P.S...ty fer the recnt Congrats
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/23/2015 8:03:00 AM
You as well James. I am pleased that you wish to read my poem to your Grand child. Have a look at my Orange crush poems on my website www.wisedummypoet.com they are listed under short stories. Your grandson might enjoy them as well.
Date: 8/21/2015 11:26:00 PM
Hello Richard, this is a well composed piece and I like the way it rolls lyrically on the toungue*******Blessings
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/22/2015 12:19:00 AM
Thanks Lewis.
Date: 8/21/2015 3:44:00 PM
Ugh, I think it flew over my house, heading northeast about 5 minutes ago...luv this one!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/22/2015 12:20:00 AM
Ha ha cute, I'm pleased you like it.
Date: 8/21/2015 2:19:00 PM
Very entertaining write, Richard! I'm sure the sponsor/s will like it! // paul
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/22/2015 12:21:00 AM
Thanks Paul, I hope you are right.
Date: 8/21/2015 7:01:00 AM
Richard, I have already read this but can I add SPLENDIFOUROUS !!! (Andrea made that word up and I stole it) and thanks for visiting my poem, something not quite right. . .
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/22/2015 12:21:00 AM
Thanks Constance, what a great word!
Date: 8/21/2015 7:00:00 AM
Richard, I have already read this but can I add SPLENDIFOUROUS !!! (Andrea made that word up and I stole it) and thanks for visiting my poem, something not quite right. . .
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Date: 8/20/2015 6:33:00 PM
I own a rusty 2003 carflufflemoose, just pray you dont have to ride in it! :) Great poem!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/22/2015 12:22:00 AM
You kill me Arthur. Thanks for the chuckle.
Date: 8/20/2015 4:37:00 PM
Well i certainly enjoyed this Richard...
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/22/2015 12:22:00 AM
Thanks Harry.
Date: 8/19/2015 9:27:00 PM
YOU DID IT. You made a very creative Seuss story. OH I HOPE I CAN DO IT TOO!!!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/22/2015 12:24:00 AM
I have no doubt about it Andrea, you will com up with something perfect.
Date: 8/19/2015 12:04:00 PM
Richard, I think it's superadorable 10+ and thanks for visiting my poem, fluttering gems
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Date: 8/19/2015 11:21:00 AM
Hey, Richard....Please look up Cas's poem...STAY. Oh....it's so beautiful. I just faved it. You've GOT to read it. :) Hugs I should be poem of the MONTH!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/23/2015 9:14:00 PM
It is really excellent!
Date: 8/19/2015 10:14:00 AM
Where might he be? :-))) A guaranteed kids' read, Rick! Delightfully funny, easy on the eye, just the right length and the right touch of light. Thanks for the visit earlier. Would have wanted to read some more but need to rest for a while. hugs!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/22/2015 12:27:00 AM
It was my pleasure to visit Kim. Goodnight.
Date: 8/19/2015 9:58:00 AM
Entertainingly beautiful and excitingly creative , dear Richard. Good luck!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/21/2015 7:54:00 AM
Thanks Demetrios.
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