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Have you ever swam in mid-air Breathing waters unclear When all you can do Is walk on your head Your feet are dead! Have you? Have you ever smiled Within yet you cried When all you can do Is accept it as it is Things will soon  be at ease Have you? Have you ever cease To exist in your presence When all you can do Is buckle up Swallow your cup in a single gulp Have you? Have you ever wished to slip In your sleep When all you can do Is hope for a better day Sorrows will surely soon give way Have you?

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Date: 3/6/2016 9:40:00 PM
Alzor, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/8/2016 9:57:00 PM
alozor, well done on your poem, enjoyed reading today. *SKAT
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Date: 10/22/2013 3:13:00 AM
Good write! Don't despair, There is hope for a better day! ( Revelation 21:4) God promises.
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Date: 10/21/2013 6:39:00 PM
Life seems to be like that many times..Enjoyed reading this one..Thanks for the visit to my page..Your comments were uplifting..Our grandson called and said that he passed the tests in the classroom and he will be learning to drive and park the trucks starting this morning..Sara
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Alozor Michael Ikechukwu
Date: 10/22/2013 3:07:00 AM
All glory to God! It is well in Jesus name, amen.
Date: 10/21/2013 2:13:00 PM
Sometimes all we can do is hope for the best while being adrift in a sea of uncertainty. Well done :)
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