Have the Cake and Eat It Too

Tranquil eye in need of a makeover,
shifts baton of awareness to the heart,
enabling zest and zeal to takeover,
whereupon we feel bliss ignition start,
that engaged in life, soul rests in clover.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Buhagiar Avatar
June 23, 2023 at 10:40 PM
Trust you to have the cake and eat. I would do the same probably, but try to follow the hard line to Heavenly bliss. Lovely poem.
Seeker Avatar
June 24, 2023 at 12:49 AM
It suffices that we pine to entwine ~ God does the rest
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