Haunting Memories

Haunting Memories
                         The Safety Zone



    It feels like I have wind chimes in my feet
        The tingling feeling is that intense
            Pins and needles keep pestering me
                But obedience is my best defense

                    Every single step is a painful memory
                        Of the childhood I never got to see
                            Walking on glass eggshells metaphorically
                                Watching my feet continually bleed

                                Too young to understand what was happening
                            So obediently I tried to be brave
                        Every night I had to cry myself to sleep
                    I hadn't even lived yet but wished for my grave

                Punishment handed out like it was an offering
            Like my pain was some sort of sadistic prize
        Hiding away in the backyard that covered me
    Holding my breath and closing my eyes




                              bmdavey@05/18/16
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Darling Avatar
September 17, 2016 at 3:56 PM
Great job!! I really liked your poem!
Davey Avatar
March 25, 2017 at 8:51 AM
Thank you
Devnath  Avatar
May 31, 2016 at 10:39 AM
Congratulation my lovely friend for your beautiful win. Loved always, bl
Davey Avatar
June 3, 2016 at 5:46 AM
Many thanks BL
A   Avatar
May 28, 2016 at 3:23 PM
Thank you so much for entering my contest.... Brian... Linda
Davey Avatar
May 28, 2016 at 6:35 PM
Thank you for hosting another great contest my friend!
Makama Avatar
May 23, 2016 at 12:58 PM
Wow! This is awesome, awesome and so awesome. This piece is heartfelt and deeper than deep.
Davey Avatar
May 23, 2016 at 6:24 PM
Thank you for your praise I appreciate it very much
Devnath  Avatar
May 21, 2016 at 6:44 PM
Excellently done, a very deep thought. My favorite too. A +7. It's reality for many, i can feel. Loved always my lovely friend, bl
Davey Avatar
May 23, 2016 at 2:42 AM
Proud to make your favorites list BL, thank you for your wonderful praise
Dietrich Avatar
May 21, 2016 at 5:29 PM
about my sad dizain, it actually IS my way of thinking, and I am a huge fan of writers like Stephen King! Anyway, I saw this poem before, so let me hunt down one I have not yet seen!!
Davey Avatar
May 23, 2016 at 2:41 AM
I didn't mean it in a bad way I just really had never read too much of your work geared towards that type! I apologize if I misspoke which I know I did now because of your split personalities poem I just read for my contest!
Chansarkar Avatar
May 19, 2016 at 10:16 AM
Sad but beautiful Brain!
Davey Avatar
May 19, 2016 at 2:00 PM
Thank you Sara
Dietrich Avatar
May 19, 2016 at 12:58 AM
It sounds very painful, Brian. Sorry if it really happened to you. (love the first line about wind chimes in your feet).
Davey Avatar
May 19, 2016 at 1:59 PM
thanks Andrea and for the record it wasn't me my parents were great but it did happen to someone I am very close to
Raynes Avatar
May 18, 2016 at 11:25 PM
good poem Brian.
Davey Avatar
May 19, 2016 at 1:57 PM
thank you very much
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