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Haunting Memories

Cast upon thy shady eyes A deathly glare of horror and demise, Pale skin against the cold dark night With lips as red and full as an evening light, Where does she wander, What does she ponder. Eyes as cold as ice Seeing nothing, but will suffice, Fire circles her about, Sadly, she knows she can’t get out, Confused by swirling memories, While the dark angels sing their harmonies. Tears of blood roll down her face, Memories not easy to erase, Of love and hate combined, Her life she left behind. A gentle scent washes over her, As quick as a minor blur, The scent of something sweet and fine Rising up with sweet divine, Its him, She thinks quite grim, The one who aches With his past mistakes, Together they will walk, Side by side in a lock, Consumed by naught but their own pain, And all the demons they have slain.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 1/5/2010 8:58:00 AM
Many congratulations on your fine poetry being featured this week, Happy New Year to you >> James
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Date: 1/4/2010 7:10:00 AM
Congrats on your feature... my poem is also "haunting". Hugs Always, Robin
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Date: 1/4/2010 3:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Jenny. May you have may more. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/12/2009 7:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it into the semi finals Jenny. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/3/2009 11:26:00 PM
Jenny, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul
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Date: 10/26/2008 4:41:00 AM
This is an excellent poem. I like the flow of the words and the message. The rhyming pattern gives a special spark to the piece. The flow and organization of the poem reminds me of an Italian or Petrarchan sonnet, where the octave section has the argument, and the sestets section has the reversal, irony or paradox. Great job! ~Joseph
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Date: 10/23/2008 3:10:00 PM
The eerie imagery forwards your thoughts in a creative way which fits with your title. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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