Lori Lucas Mcclure Poet Free verse

Haunting Love

"A love so tender that it cannot be expressed 
                   in word and mak's the heart ache because of it.”   


              


                                  Sweet half-forgotten memories
                         Resurrected with the whisper of your name
                               A love that could never be tamed
                                              Wild and free
                        My magnificent obsession, my eternal flame
                 Etched upon my heart a love that cannot be written, 
     A haunting that grips my heart with a palpable waves of longing
                      Inevitably changed... never to be the same



 by:    Lori MCClure 
for  A Poem Please

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Caryl Ramsdale September 3, 2011 at 3:56 AM A Sixth Place Win Congratulations. CR

Don Johnson August 30, 2011 at 11:08 PM Love your poem Lori babe, the pain the hurt obsession, the thoughts of mind, the longing time, yes I have learned this lesson...well done!

Tim B August 30, 2011 at 7:45 PM Wow, beautiful expression of longing and love here Lori, well written and a deserving winner! Congratulations!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 30, 2011 at 4:38 PM Congrats Lori on your exciting win with this magnificent poetry luv.. enjoy..

Wilma Neels August 30, 2011 at 3:05 PM Lori, congratulations on your win in the contest ;) Wilma

Ralph Taylor August 30, 2011 at 12:14 PM Congrats on your win, Lori. Excellent write. Nice going. luv Ralph

David Williams August 30, 2011 at 11:12 AM hey Lori congrats on your win, loved it... David

Carol Sunshine Brown August 30, 2011 at 10:30 AM Congratulations on your placement in Constance's "A Poem, Please" contest Lori. Love, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown July 28, 2011 at 3:46 PM Wonderful creative writing today Lori. I will be back soon to read more if the gremlins in PoetrySoup will permit. Love, Carol

Steven Cooke July 28, 2011 at 12:36 PM i like this, good subject material, and we all have a girl like that in our past. good poetry