Haunted Woods

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For Tania Kitchin's the 'Haunted House, Haunted Cemetery or Haunted Woods 16 Lines of Rhyme' Poetry Contest

Into the depths of Haunted Woods
I warn you not to ever go.
Rumor has it some have seen
therein a strange and blueish glow.

Most hasten out – not venturing
to find the source of that strange gleam.
From those who dared to go to it
was heard a very frightened scream.

They screamed but once; then all was still,
and witnesses have this to say:
those souls so bold that ventured forth
have not been seen yet to this day.

But there’s a strange phenomenon.
When that odd light appears again
it’s bluer than it was before.
Observers feel a bit insane!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 11/4/2024 11:52:00 PM
Congrats on your win Andrea
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Date: 10/30/2024 4:12:00 PM
It’s those police having their lunch in the woods….. Or is it? Spooky win, Andrea. Congrats
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Date: 10/27/2024 10:00:00 PM
Hi Andrea, your poem is very spooky ! Congratulations on your first place win.
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Date: 10/27/2024 9:34:00 PM
Congratulations!
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Date: 10/27/2024 8:44:00 PM
congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers.
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Date: 10/27/2024 11:59:00 AM
Andrea, CONGRATS on your win with this well-plotted tale. Janice
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Date: 10/27/2024 11:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your first place in the contest Andrea.
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Date: 10/27/2024 11:43:00 AM
Scary and haunting, Andrea! Congratulations on your win! Blessings!
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Date: 10/27/2024 11:21:00 AM
Congrats on your haunting write! A glow, a scream, best to stay away.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/27/2024 11:27:00 AM
Many thanks, Kim
Date: 10/27/2024 8:30:00 AM
Congrats, Andrea. Well done, as always.
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Date: 10/27/2024 7:11:00 AM
Andrea, a great spooky poem, congratulations on your first place win.
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Date: 10/19/2024 3:28:00 AM
My sort of place, address please.
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Date: 10/19/2024 2:32:00 AM
PERHAPS ALIENS ABDUCTED THEM FOR RESEARCH. SCARY THOUGHT THOUGH. SORRY ABOUT CAPS. LOVE JENNIFER.
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Date: 10/18/2024 3:19:00 PM
This is very cool writing...with a touch of humor, love it :) <3
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Date: 10/17/2024 6:49:00 PM
A mysterious light hue, unlike the blackness of tonight make for a scary rhyme. Spellbound, this had me immerse. It's a good write.
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Date: 10/17/2024 11:51:00 AM
A "thing" getting fed and growing with each snack ... Shivers. Nice write, Andrea :)
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/17/2024 5:59:00 PM
Yep!
Date: 10/17/2024 9:58:00 AM
You've produced a winner, Andrea - good luck in the contest - Bob H
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/17/2024 5:59:00 PM
Thanks, Robert
Date: 10/17/2024 5:51:00 AM
Haunting, Andrea. A scary presence indeed, gave me jitters.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/17/2024 6:00:00 PM
Thanks, Anaya
Date: 10/17/2024 1:25:00 AM
This is an enjoyable haunted poem. Good luck with the contest.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/17/2024 6:00:00 PM
Thanks, Hilda
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