Edward Ibeh Poet Footle

Haunted House Visit

prepared
     though scared

oh, my!
     deep sigh

house tour?
     not sure

twilight
     fright night

weird sounds
     astounds

creepy!
     freaky!

loud screams
     tour teams

ghosts sought
     cold spot


A New Hiku Footle Tanka Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Brian Strand
Date written: 11/06/2022

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Andrea Dietrich November 13, 2022 at 3:15 PM congrats on the well deserved win, Edward Ibeh November 14, 2022 at 2:44 AM Thank you very much, Andrea:-)

Linda Alice Fowler November 10, 2022 at 6:58 AM Very clever and creepy Edward. Congratulations your win! :) Edward Ibeh November 10, 2022 at 7:38 AM Thank you so much, Linda:-) Most appreciated.

Meru Groen November 9, 2022 at 10:26 PM The fear that we feel, can help us find the courage... to choose the right way! Happy Holidays...Edward a fan...Meru Edward Ibeh November 10, 2022 at 7:36 AM Thank you very much, Meru:-) Happy Holidays!

Sara Kendrick November 8, 2022 at 2:01 PM Congratulations on this scary winner being on the winners' list in Brian's contest. Way to go. Sara Edward Ibeh November 9, 2022 at 4:37 AM Thank you very much, Sara:-)

Valsa George November 6, 2022 at 8:41 PM Love your footle, dear Edward ! All the Best in the contest! Edward Ibeh November 7, 2022 at 5:13 AM Thank you very much, Valsa:-)