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Poetry/Rhyme/Haunted House
Copyright Protected, ID 10-1681-939-18
All Rights Reserved, 2024, Constance La France
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Human Written

Written, October 18, 2024
For the International Contest, Haunted
Sponsor,  Tania Kitchin, Judged 10/27/2024

 

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Haunted House



I was always an odd curious little girl,
      and not far away was a haunted house;
unruly boys came often with big rocks to hurl,
            many times at windows I saw a mouse.

I was told stories of the house's history,
      during war was used as a hospital;
hooded nuns lived there but that is a mystery,
            for the nun's stories were noncommittal.

I wanted to get inside to investigate,
      then, I saw a face on an upper floor;
and by now the house was surrounded by a gate,
             but this sleuth would get in that haunted door.

I climbed the fence and walked up to the haunted home,
      turning the rusted door - it opened wide;
waiting was a creepy nun ( have you come to roam,
            forever) . . .  they whispered that I had died.
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Canerdy Avatar
October 24, 2024 at 6:21 AM
A skillfully-woven narrative piece with a surprise ending~~well done, Constance. Janice
La France Avatar
October 25, 2024 at 8:53 AM
Janice, thank you for the comment and compliment, love Constance
Lane Avatar
October 18, 2024 at 5:07 PM
I never expected to discover that you’d already died. Very nicely written, Constance.
La France Avatar
October 19, 2024 at 3:18 PM
Lin, thanks for the comment and compliment, yep I died in the poem but very much alive now, love Constance
Greenhough Avatar
October 18, 2024 at 2:15 PM
A cute Halloween poem. Best wishes.
La France Avatar
October 18, 2024 at 2:38 PM
Hilda, thanks for the comment, it was creepy writing it, love Constance
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