Haunted House

Half asleep, I sensed movement in my room, and the air felt cold, and smelled like a tomb. Yet, I couldn't see what was haunting this place: for it was a shadow, without a face. My reportedly haunted house went cheap, so the thought of ghosts didn't rob me of sleep. But now, the hairs on my arms stood up straight, and my pulse raced at an alarming rate. I felt a menacing presence was near, and my muscles froze, paralyzed by fear. When it approached, a chill ran up my spine, and I felt more fear than words could define. I passed out, and when I woke, it was gone: I got up; for it was time to move on. And I listed my house for sale that day: a genuinely haunted getaway.
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Flood Avatar
October 30, 2024 at 4:46 PM
When a deal looks too good… it probably is. Hey, it got you a spooky win. Congrats
Crandall Avatar
October 30, 2024 at 10:54 AM
Nicely written Emile! I guess you have to be suspicious when the price is so low.
Pinet Avatar
October 30, 2024 at 1:29 PM
Thank you, David; I appreciate your comments, my friend. Emile.
mysore Avatar
October 27, 2024 at 8:58 PM
beautiful weave. congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers.
Pinet Avatar
October 28, 2024 at 6:12 AM
Thank you, Thriveni; I appreciate your comments, my friend. Emile.
Kitchin Avatar
October 27, 2024 at 8:11 AM
Emile, I enjoyed your haunted tale, congratulations on your winning placement.
Pinet Avatar
October 27, 2024 at 11:56 AM
Thank you, Tania; I appreciate the placement and your comments, my friend. Emile.
Smith Avatar
October 18, 2024 at 11:47 PM
Spooky and catchy rhyming! :O
Pinet Avatar
October 19, 2024 at 8:27 AM
Thank you, Michelle; I appreciate your comments, my friend. Emile.
Lane Avatar
October 18, 2024 at 9:42 AM
Oh, yeah. I'd have left that place, too! An exciting tale.
Pinet Avatar
October 18, 2024 at 10:44 AM
Thank you, Lin; I appreciate your comments, my friend. Emile.
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