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Haunted House

Half asleep, I sensed movement in my room, and the air felt cold, it smelled like a tomb. Yet I couldn't see the ghost haunting this place; it was more a shadow, without a face. This notorious haunted house went cheap, so the thought of ghosts didn't rob me of sleep. But now, the hairs on my arms stood up straight, and my pulse raced at an alarming rate. I felt a menacing presence was near, and my muscles froze, paralyzed by fear. When it touched me, a chill ran up my spine, and I felt more fear than words could define. I passed out; when I awoke, it was gone, and I packed up; it was time to move on. I listed the house for sale that same day; a genuinely haunted getaway.
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Date: 10/30/2024 4:46:00 PM
When a deal looks too good… it probably is. Hey, it got you a spooky win. Congrats
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Date: 10/30/2024 10:54:00 AM
Nicely written Emile! I guess you have to be suspicious when the price is so low.
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Date: 10/30/2024 1:29:00 PM
Thank you, David; I appreciate your comments, my friend. Emile.
Date: 10/27/2024 8:58:00 PM
beautiful weave. congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers.
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Date: 10/28/2024 6:12:00 AM
Thank you, Thriveni; I appreciate your comments, my friend. Emile.
Date: 10/27/2024 8:11:00 AM
Emile, I enjoyed your haunted tale, congratulations on your winning placement.
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Date: 10/27/2024 11:56:00 AM
Thank you, Tania; I appreciate the placement and your comments, my friend. Emile.
Date: 10/18/2024 11:47:00 PM
Spooky and catchy rhyming! :O
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Emile Pinet
Date: 10/19/2024 8:27:00 AM
Thank you, Michelle; I appreciate your comments, my friend. Emile.
Date: 10/18/2024 9:42:00 AM
Oh, yeah. I'd have left that place, too! An exciting tale.
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Date: 10/18/2024 10:44:00 AM
Thank you, Lin; I appreciate your comments, my friend. Emile.
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