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Haunted By a Long Lost Love

He was my rainbow and my fantasy dream
I met him at a cafe and fell into his eyes
his voice deep like distant thunder

At his tomb I weep, I know
I am-  haunted by a long lost love
and I cannot let go

Will not let go ever, never
I said, "I do"-  and it was for evermore
with love stronger than death

It happened in a wild winter snow storm
I begged him not to go but he laughed
back in bed I could not sleep
so I made coffee-
a loud knock broke my reverie

He had driven into a ravine
those brown eyes dead
his thunder silenced
he flew to Heaven in the snow
my eagle has flown up and away, away

In dreams I float with hair filigree
he is but sleeping in bed
and opens his eyes
pulling me to him and bruising my lips
at his tomb I weep, I know
I am-  haunted by a long lost love
and I cannot let go
ever

People who love me deeply
say-  let go, let him rest in peace
move on

At his tomb I weep, I know
I am-  haunted by a long lost love
and I cannot let go
will not

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August 31, 2018


Poetry/Verse/Haunted By a Long Lost Love
Copyright Protected, ID 1056-189-01


Contest - One In Five II
Sponsor - Joseph May

Phrase used - No 1-  Haunted by a long lost love

Second Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Sefunmi Avatar
September 29, 2018 at 5:41 AM
Such a sad poem, though very hard but I hope you will learn to let go. I lost my dad twenty years ago. I held him as he breathed his last and I was just seventeen years. I loved and admired him so much. I am also learning to let go.
La France Avatar
September 20, 2018 at 9:21 AM
Thank you Subimal for visiting my poem with congrats and a big thanks to Joseph for placing my poem in your contest, it was great inspiration.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 20, 2018 at 4:26 AM
Congratulations, Constance on your win.
May Avatar
September 19, 2018 at 7:46 PM
Such a sad event Dear Heart..I hope, in time, you'll find closure..Congrats on your win..
La France Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 10:11 AM
Jack and Sunlite, thank you for visiting and for your awesome comments ~
Wanter Avatar
August 31, 2018 at 6:37 PM
I can feel it! Very convincing! To love in your heart and to be taken lightly is tragic.
Horne Avatar
August 31, 2018 at 10:53 AM
heartfelt & heartbreaking write, my friend x
La France Avatar
August 31, 2018 at 10:32 AM
Hi Poetic Friends, well another dark poem from my bleeding pen and a true poem, I did lose my love in a winter storm, and he still remains my true love, yes, I know it is time to move on, easier said than done.
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