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- Haunted -

They looked forward to spend the weekend
 in this haunted aged castle
 Who believes in haunted stories?

 It was evening when they arrived
 the table was set for twelve guests
 even if there were only four of them
 The food was served in silence by the host
 They just wanted to enjoy the meal and
 jump to bed early

 Suddenly the one empty chair moves
 pushed half a meter backwards with one
 scraper sound
 The sound reaches right into the spinal cord
 Everyone agreed it was scary
 But who believes in haunted stories?

 They understood that it was
 several guests at the table than invited
 Perhaps residents from earlier eras
 After the meal they sat in silence and listened
 Low muttering and the sound of knife against porcelain
 and glasses that clinked
 Where reality is no longer sufficient
 and the imagination is given free rein

 Neither the dog nor the guest found peace at night
 whose slumbers their eyelids were wide open
 The experience of what was real and true
 that night no one can confirm
 They tried to ignore it at first
 but could feel someone breathing down their necks

 Doors that were locked from the inside were opened
 by invisible hands
 The floor creaked and there was a cold grave breath in the room
 The weekend was cut short after this one night
 Hey, who believes in haunted stories?
 Their memories are now tattooed and haunted
 Incomprehensible to people who have never experienced this



 26.02.2023
 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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 - H - Words - Poetry Contest - 
 Sponsored by: Constance La France 
 1st place in the contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Volumes Avatar
March 12, 2023 at 6:25 AM
A scary story Anne-Lise. Well written and compelling. Congrats on the win . Well deserved.
Rose  Avatar
March 2, 2023 at 5:01 AM
lol thank God I never entered that castle of yours, I'd be running scared too. Congrats on your win, amazing story dear heart :)
Andresen Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 8:06 AM
- Thank you very much, Vie Rose :) - hugs
La France Avatar
March 2, 2023 at 12:47 AM
Sunshine, excellent writing for this haunted poem, and what a great image, congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - H Words, well done, blessings, Constance
Andresen Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 8:05 AM
- Thank you very much, Constance :) - hugs
Messina Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 7:31 PM
Ooh, I love spooky scary stories. And this one fits the bill :) Congratulations, Anne-Lise on your winning placement! Hugs // Charlie
Andresen Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 8:05 AM
- Thank you very much, Charlie :) - hugs
Edmonds  Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 3:39 PM
An haunting write Anne-Lise, so good I doubt I’ll be able to sleep tonight especially as I’m on my own, husband in hospital again unfortunately. Congratulations on your win in Constance’s contest… Belle
Andresen Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 8:05 AM
- Thank you very much, Belle :) - hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 1:15 PM
Back with Congratulations on your win with your "Haunted" write/picture. Have a blessed day.............
Andresen Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 8:05 AM
- Thank you very much, Paula :) - hugs
Parker Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 11:50 AM
congratulation my poetic friend I really enjoyed your haunting poem, sad though it ended too soon I wanted it to continue
Andresen Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 8:04 AM
- Thank you very much, Frederic :) - hugs
Poet Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 9:44 AM
Congratulations, Anne-Lise, on the top-winning achievement; your poem is so lovely, and I like the way you depicted the striking metaphors.
Andresen Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 8:04 AM
- Thank you very much, Las :) - hugs
Daniel Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 2:31 AM
Haunting poem, Anne-lise:)
Andresen Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 8:04 AM
- Thank you very much, Jo :) - hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
February 27, 2023 at 1:28 PM
Your "Haunted" is a wonderful story/write/picture. Good Luck with this one. I may not sleep tonight. Lights On, Please!!! Hugs. Have a blessed/fun day writing away....................
Andresen Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 8:04 AM
- Thank you very much, Paula :) - hugs
Kendrick Avatar
February 27, 2023 at 8:34 AM
Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. There is always something scary about an old abandoned house of any size. Thanks for sharing and for dropping my page. Sara
Andresen Avatar
February 27, 2023 at 8:46 AM
- Thank you for reading and your comment, Sara :) - hugs
Trifiatis Avatar
February 27, 2023 at 8:32 AM
Spooky! Very exciting writing, dearest Anne-Lise. I was taken in by the story. Thank you for the experience. Hugs.
Andresen Avatar
February 27, 2023 at 8:46 AM
- Thank you for reading and your comment, Demetrios :) - hugs
George Avatar
February 27, 2023 at 3:16 AM
Very scary.... ! Though frightening, there is a thrill in reading ghost stories. I love them. Doors locked from inside getting opened.... whoooo..... ! Just imagine the fright of those inside. Great entry Smile....
Andresen Avatar
February 27, 2023 at 8:46 AM
- Thank you for reading and your comment, Valsa :) - hugs
Buhagiar Avatar
February 27, 2023 at 2:30 AM
Lovely ghost stories. makes one scary. Best for a win.
Andresen Avatar
February 27, 2023 at 8:45 AM
- Thank you for reading and your comment, Victor :) - hugs
Rose  Avatar
February 26, 2023 at 5:59 PM
You gave us such a fright, I won't be checking in Sunshine, no matter how much you beg me, lol , gl in the contest this is well written , love it
Andresen Avatar
February 27, 2023 at 8:45 AM
- Thank you for reading and your comment, Vie Rose :) - hugs
Pandit Avatar
February 26, 2023 at 2:07 PM
Spooky, creepy depiction, Anne-Lise--fit for the contest theme you chose. Ghostly sights and sounds resonate from the haunted castle. Well done, indeed!
Andresen Avatar
February 27, 2023 at 8:45 AM
- Thank you for reading and your comment, Vijay :) - hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
February 26, 2023 at 12:39 PM
Interesting write, Anne-Lise! The ghosts intertwined with the guests.
Andresen Avatar
February 27, 2023 at 8:45 AM
- Thank you for reading and your comment, Kim :) - hugs
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