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Haunted

I wake from dreams and sweating, stare; and as the clock is striking three, the ghostly form appears to me. 'Oh no,' I say, 'it cannot be - just nerves affecting what I see.' The figure floats around my bed. It makes a fearful moaning sound, its eyes are holes as black as night, its face a glowing shade of white, and adding to that ghastly sight, it seems to move from left to right, but leaves no shadow on the ground. I close my eyes and pray for peace, but sense it coming ever near - no words describe my utter fear! I wonder was it too much beer? But no, this thing is really here, and will this nightmare ever cease? It speaks my name in eerie tones. 'I'm sorry that you had to die - I fired the gun...I don't know why,' I murmur, causing it to cry, 'They fried you in The Chair.'  I sigh, and then I crumple, dusty bones... written 1st November for Joseph's Rhymes Sublime contest

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Date: 11/23/2020 10:35:00 AM
Hello Jack Horne, Congrad on your win. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Date: 11/20/2020 9:30:00 AM
Congrats on this winner. Sara
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Date: 11/19/2020 10:52:00 AM
Jack congratulations my friend, I enjoyed your poem so much - so scary, so clever and a superb ending. Well done Jack. Hugs and blessings,
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Date: 11/19/2020 7:49:00 AM
Nicely and spookily written Jack. :) Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Date: 11/19/2020 6:01:00 AM
I enjoyed this haunting tale, Congrats on your win..
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Date: 11/5/2020 3:15:00 PM
oooh, a mystery within a mystery. SO cleverly done, Jack. A winner in MY book.
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Date: 11/3/2020 1:50:00 PM
Ah, so the dead person is seeing "ghosts," Jack? Wow, very clever. I found the story behind this poem engrossing. A fave for me! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 11/1/2020 8:27:00 PM
This is truly spooky and very engaging. Loved your rhymes scheme and your meter is spot on, but my oh my, what a creepy tale! Best wishes, Jack
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Date: 11/1/2020 3:36:00 PM
An creepy tale indeed. Ending brought it all together. Well penned my friend. Stay well.
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Date: 11/1/2020 12:49:00 PM
Hi Jack, What a great entry for the contest theme. A spooky dream/ nightmare.Good rhymes and content. I wasn’t expecting that ending at all. Best wishes in the contest.Enjoy the rest of your day- Alexis
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