Hauled

in that
shopping
cart,

tearing the
pavement
with riotous
laughter

even after
those wheels
caught that
crack

sending you
sprawled into
the pickled
night.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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January 28, 2010 at 2:19 PM
ahhh FUN..hmmm what's a pickled night? sounds salty? sweet and sour..hmmmm yes a sweet and sour night! Light & Love OR sending you pickled and sprawling into the night? ;)
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