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Hauki X 3

lonely cloud wanders over the expanse of sky seeking for others red stag on hilltop silhouetted in sun light roaring out his claim black clouds whipping in blustery winds stir the sea towering waves crash down

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 12/26/2013 12:06:00 PM
What a beautiful write. So visual and well written. I saw a stag on my way to Nottingham a few months ago. I was so happy as a child again. very well done, best wishes. Pete.
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Peter Dome
Date: 12/27/2013 8:51:00 AM
Wow, that must have been magical, something you wouldn't forget. thank you for sharing. take good care. best wishes. Pete.
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 12/27/2013 5:04:00 AM
hi Peter I can remember finding a small fawn in Windsor great park as a child we did not touch it although we could have it was a magical moment ty very much Shadow x smile hug
Date: 12/23/2013 7:25:00 AM
I enjoyed the great imagery of this haiku Shadow...Merry Christmas
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 12/23/2013 7:46:00 AM
ty Joseph have a good week end Shadow x smile hug
Date: 12/22/2013 1:17:00 PM
Very descriptive work..I could almost see the scene..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 12/23/2013 6:44:00 AM
hi Sara my brave friend ty so much "season's greetings, peace and health" Shadow x smile hug
Date: 12/22/2013 12:45:00 AM
Good reading here Shadow, love your imagery and spirit in words used..'
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Date: 12/23/2013 6:41:00 AM
hi Joe and ty dear "season's greetings" Shadow x smile hug
Date: 12/21/2013 7:57:00 PM
Beautiful images created , Shadow
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 12/23/2013 6:41:00 AM
hi and ty Ram "season's greetings" Shadow x smile hug
Date: 12/21/2013 3:36:00 PM
Cheers x 3 for your lovely haiku's, Shadow. Have a good festive season ahead of you, my friend. Licia :-)
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 12/21/2013 4:04:00 PM
hi Licia ty for reading and enjoying season's greetings Shadow x smile hug
Date: 12/21/2013 3:22:00 PM
All three have their own unique power.
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Date: 12/21/2013 3:02:00 PM
- 3 beautiful pearls on a string, Shadow !!! - - HAPPY CHRISTMAS !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 12/21/2013 4:03:00 PM
hi Anne Lise soon a new year with all its spills and thrills ty for your continued support season's greetings Shadow x smile hug

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