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Hauki X 3

lonely cloud wanders
over the expanse of sky
seeking for others

red stag on hilltop
silhouetted in sun light
roaring out his claim

black clouds whipping in
blustery winds stir the sea
towering waves crash down

Copyright © Shadow Hamilton | Year Posted 2013

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Peter Dome Date: 12/26/2013 12:06:00 PM What a beautiful write. So visual and well written. I saw a stag on my way to Nottingham a few months ago. I was so happy as a child again. very well done, best wishes. Pete. Login to Reply Peter Dome Date: 12/27/2013 8:51:00 AM Wow, that must have been magical, something you wouldn't forget. thank you for sharing. take good care. best wishes. Pete. Shadow Hamilton Date: 12/27/2013 5:04:00 AM hi Peter I can remember finding a small fawn in Windsor great park as a child we did not touch it although we could have it was a magical moment ty very much Shadow x smile hug

Joseph May Date: 12/23/2013 7:25:00 AM I enjoyed the great imagery of this haiku Shadow...Merry Christmas Login to Reply Shadow Hamilton Date: 12/23/2013 7:46:00 AM ty Joseph have a good week end Shadow x smile hug

Sara Kendrick Date: 12/22/2013 1:17:00 PM Very descriptive work..I could almost see the scene..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Login to Reply Shadow Hamilton Date: 12/23/2013 6:44:00 AM hi Sara my brave friend ty so much "season's greetings, peace and health" Shadow x smile hug

Joe Maverick Date: 12/22/2013 12:45:00 AM Good reading here Shadow, love your imagery and spirit in words used..' Login to Reply Shadow Hamilton Date: 12/23/2013 6:41:00 AM hi Joe and ty dear "season's greetings" Shadow x smile hug

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 12/21/2013 7:57:00 PM Beautiful images created , Shadow Login to Reply Shadow Hamilton Date: 12/23/2013 6:41:00 AM hi and ty Ram "season's greetings" Shadow x smile hug

Delysia Hendricks Date: 12/21/2013 3:36:00 PM Cheers x 3 for your lovely haiku's, Shadow. Have a good festive season ahead of you, my friend. Licia :-) Login to Reply Shadow Hamilton Date: 12/21/2013 4:04:00 PM hi Licia ty for reading and enjoying season's greetings Shadow x smile hug

Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/21/2013 3:22:00 PM All three have their own unique power. Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/21/2013 3:02:00 PM - 3 beautiful pearls on a string, Shadow !!! - - HAPPY CHRISTMAS !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Shadow Hamilton Date: 12/21/2013 4:03:00 PM hi Anne Lise soon a new year with all its spills and thrills ty for your continued support season's greetings Shadow x smile hug