Hate's Fury

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Author's Notes: "Hate's Fury" highlights some salient aspects akin to the infamous negative emotion we all know as "Hate." The "Fury" aspect captures the sense of anger or rage that accompanies any hateful speech or actions associated with a possible surge of violent anger and other negative feelings or actions. This Shadorma poem consists of a six-line stanza with a syllabication count of 3/5/3/3/7/5 for a total of 26 syllables. (Gary Bateman - November 15, 2018) (Shadorma)

Thematic Categories: anger, angst, character, emotions, hurt, metaphor, and symbolism.

Hate’s Fury It’s horrid prompts the worst action— vile anger blood boils hot a true mindless impulse that wounds the soul deepest Gary Bateman, Copyright © All Rights Reserved November 15, 2018 (Shadorma)

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Lyric Man

Date: 11/16/2018 5:28:00 AM

Gary.. I loved your notes that went along with this expressive piece!

Gary Bateman
Date: 11/16/2018 8:38:00 AM

Hey Lyric Man!! Many Thanks to you for dropping by and taking a read of my latest Shadorma poem. I am pleased to hear too that my author's notes hit the mark for you. Most usually I do notes with each of my poems. I do this to inform the reader about the poem, and as an audit trail of sorts for each poem I develop and see through to completion. Thanks Again and Best Wishes Always, Gary

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/15/2018 2:34:00 PM

Your last line sums up the affects of hate perfectly Gary. This is so insightful and gives pause to those who have felt such anger. Brilliant! : )

Gary Bateman
Date: 11/16/2018 8:32:00 AM

Hello Connie, Thanks for your comment and observations here!! Hate and all of the negative aspects of it and ramifications from it, is not a good course to follow at all. (We have enough of it in our present day world!!) I'm very pleased that you found my poem here to be Brilliant!! With that comment, I feel at least I am doing something right with my poetic verse work!! Cheers and Best Wishes, Gary

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/15/2018 2:05:00 PM

So true Gary! Well written and shows it exactly as it is :)

Gary Bateman
Date: 11/15/2018 2:10:00 PM

Thanks Heidi for your very observant comment here. As bad as both Hate and Fury, separate or together, are -- they are exactly what they are. It's always better to embrace the positive side of things. Amen!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/15/2018 1:23:00 PM

ohh gary, a compelling write in such few words.. i did a shadorma contest before, and i'm sure this fiery piece would have won in mine... greeat diction and artwords!...huggs

Gary Bateman
Date: 11/15/2018 1:28:00 PM

Ohh . . . Nette!! I know you've sponsored a contest on Shadorma poetry before. This is especially why I really enjoy your comments every time I write one of these!! I'm very pleased you enjoyed this one!! Best Wishes Always, Gary