Hatefull

I've let this hate crawl in my heart for far to long,
It's time to stand and face the throng
of family, friends, and from the fog
comes a mirror; and I see,
a lone person standing there; me.
Even I am here to see myself,
and my figure is sitting upon a shelf.
it consumes and tells me that every thing's fine,
that im perfect the way I am, and that the sun's shine
shines because of me, and that's what made me happy.
But in that mirror, i see the shelf, and it's name-tag reads "Hate Itself"
and i see the sadness across myself, sitting, alone, on that shelf.
But past the mirror, then i see, everyone, and realize they're here for me.
To see me change to my once radiant self, would then, i realized, take me from the 
shelf.
So with the hands of all i knew, they pulled me down from the shelf,
and i felt a sensation inside myself.
A loving, caring, warmer side that, when i felt, i gave a smile.
I know feel love, and my heart will mend,
i forced hate into my life; it told me it was my only friend.
But now i see the difference inside of me, and in my face, its plain to see that I've 
changed for the good in me, now that christ has set me free.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 8/29/2011 10:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your fine poetry being featured this week Patrick. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/19/2011 7:20:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today Patrick. I enjoyed reading it and will be back again soon to read more. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/19/2011 4:24:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Patrick. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 7/18/2011 6:51:00 PM
Enjoyed this well penned poem, Patrick
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Date: 7/18/2011 6:40:00 PM
a fitting spiritual tribute to our Lord and Savior Jesus Christ .. can turn lives around with a touch or a word... this is extremely beautiful insight Rick.. breathtaking lines of insight luv..
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