Hate Will Never Pass the Test - Part 2 of 2

I stopped beneath a big oak tree
and tried to catch my breath
My body it was shaking still,
he scared me half to death

I pulled my notebook to my lap,
my hand it held the pen
And started writing poetry,
my love for her again

When then I looked above my place,
the branches filled with birds
They watched as I was writing this,
they chirped at every word

“Don’t let that old crow bother you”
I heard their voices say
“He wants to be the only one,
that’s why he acts this way”

“Just keep on writing poetry,
your verses are the best
Be yourself, you’re doing fine,
to that we can attest”

“There’ll always be someone like him
that tries to pull you down
But worry not, just wear a smile
in place of that old frown”

So that I did, I wrote and wrote
and didn’t have a care
So I could always send my love
to you I long to share

I penned for you a poem of
affections written deep
Hoping that close to your heart
my words you’d always keep

When then again I heard that voice,
my day then turned to night
“I see you’re writing poetry,
I knew that I was right”

“I’ll tell you what I’m gonna do,
we’ll put it to a test
You write yours and I’ll write mine,
we’ll see who is the best”

I closed my eyes and thought of us,
my mind held such a view
I wrote some lines of perfect prose
to say that I love you

He scratched and clawed upon his pad
and with an evil grin
He tossed the page down on the ground
and said, “Let’s go, begin”

I read the words that he did write
and if I must confess
I didn’t understand a thing,
his poem was a mess

Several lines of gibberish,
hate in every breath
Calling names of everyone,
he even threatened death

And then he read my offering,
a look came on his face
His feathers black had turned to ash,
his head hung in disgrace

For love shall win out every time  
in ink of gentle flow
“Go spew your hatred someplace else,
it’s time for you to go”

I watched him as he flew away,
a sulking fading bird
On silent wings he disappeared,
he uttered not a word

I often walk along that path
but now I wear a smile
For I’m still writing poetry
in my romantic style

Though I will not forget that day
as these words come to mind
“Hate will never pass the test,
it’s better to be kind”

Thank you for reading my poem.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 11/29/2016 6:50:00 AM
This is awesome... I LOVE this so much.. yes I can see why Tom mentioned my Grake poem, as it reminds me a little of this poem. My favorite stanza: “There’ll always be someone like him that tries to pull you down But worry not, just wear a smile in place of that old frown”
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Chris Green
Date: 11/29/2016 8:34:00 AM
Thank you so very much Rebecca for your kind thoughts in this wonderful comment of my poem. Coming from an amazing poetess like you, this mean a lot to me. I am thrilled you enjoyed this. And yes I saw the similarities when I read your fantastic Grake poem. Which again I'll say, just blew me away.
Date: 11/29/2016 6:29:00 AM
Happy endings are the best, are they not. Warm and righteous write, Chris. Got this old lion smiling. Poetry is in good hands after gray heads like me pass on. You represent the next generation well. And of course, hate will never beat love in the end. Love always.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/29/2016 8:32:00 AM
Thanks so very much Freddie, I appreciate your kind words and you reading both parts of this long poem. I am excited you enjoyed this one so much.
Date: 11/28/2016 12:45:00 PM
I'm glad you won the challenge...and you are still here to write for her affectionately and beautifully..Some people can indeed turn sour..Maybe they are not bad...just lost. Kindness always win over anger and hatred in the end..A favourite..to one of the best soupers on ps.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/28/2016 1:00:00 PM
What a nice thing to say, thank you so much Charmaine. Yep, sometimes you just have to ignore and keep writing. I appreciate your nice comments always.
Date: 11/28/2016 12:08:00 PM
incredible, chris... nothing can be more redeeming than seeing the dove instead of the crow... keep on writing and ignore the soiled feathers.. huggs
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Chris Green
Date: 11/28/2016 12:32:00 PM
Thank you so much Nette, I am happy you liked this one so much. Your kind words are always a gift to me.
Date: 11/28/2016 11:56:00 AM
Omg. Chris.. You are so self aware.. and you can express that in your writing...I'm truly amazed by your giftedness..
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Chris Green
Date: 11/28/2016 12:30:00 PM
Thanks so very much Holly, I am happy you stopped by to read this long poem today. I appreciate your thoughtful comments and your friendship.
Date: 11/28/2016 10:44:00 AM
WoW! Chris, the message in this well written piece is really good. The old crow represents hater. You are an amazing writer and your ink flows of love and kindess. In this world haters will always exist, but we must not let them get us. As you so skillfully wrote, we are to kill them with kindness.In the end love we always reign. Excellent job. A without a doubt seven:-) Alexis
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Chris Green
Date: 11/28/2016 10:48:00 AM
Thank you so very much my sweet friend for taking the time to read this long winded effort and for your always nice comments about my poetry. I am so happy you enjoyed this poem and the message I placed within. Your kindness always makes me smile.
Date: 11/28/2016 10:21:00 AM
This is great Chris. There will always be some "haters" kill them with kindness...I could almost hear the dueling fiddles.
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Date: 11/28/2016 10:46:00 AM
Ha, yep my friend, I suppose you could. :) The devil is in the details. Thanks for reading and commenting Tim. I appreciate your kindness.
Date: 11/28/2016 9:45:00 AM
Great story Chris. What a nice message! Part 2 wrapped this up perfectly. Thanks for sharing ! :)
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Date: 11/28/2016 10:38:00 AM
Thank you for reading my long winded poem Heidi. I am happy you enjoyed it.
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