Hate Shroud

Hate is a dark shroud that tries to swallow you whole
if you let it it will kill the little light inside you
it leads to depression and sorrow in your heart never letting the light leave
this is something we can't let happen
if we do we will ultimately be destroted by orselves
Hate shrouds are near immortal if allowed to live
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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March 3, 2011 at 9:08 PM
hummm ! this is very interesting and true... well i hate pretty much peeps around me.. the light is standing still and does not want to move... well nice point at the end,..p.d.
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