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Hatching the Dead Premiere Contest Winner

Hatching the Dead Blocking out unopened space this prison in my head Crawling all up inside of me laying eggs to hatch the dead The silent stillness reminding me that I must be all alone An inferno burns inside where only the Devil feels at home No safety signs flash warnings, stop this bleeding in my mind Relaxing is just a broken dream my nightmares can never find Don't say things will get better, false hope only breeds hate Learn to accept suffering instead of fist fighting your own fate With these lessons the student fails, their are no passing grades Don't watch, think about, or remember me, my impression always fades Just in case you were wondering I'm not scared but I am afraid Dead gone the exhausted me, living with death in different shades Written for contest "Basic Rhyming Words" Hosted by: IrONic ZiNk 05/21/17 WON 1st PLACE IN CONTEST RESULTS

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Date: 6/12/2017 2:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your 1st place win. Really impressive poem!
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Brian Davey
Date: 9/24/2017 11:39:00 AM
thank you so much and I apologize for the late response but I was in a bad car accident
Date: 5/31/2017 8:20:00 AM
Hi Brian. Congrats for your well, deserved first placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Brian Davey
Date: 9/24/2017 11:39:00 AM
thank you so much and I apologize for the late response but I was in a bad car accident
Date: 5/31/2017 8:16:00 AM
Hi Brian. Congrats for your well, deserved first placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Brian Davey
Date: 9/24/2017 11:39:00 AM
thank you so much and I apologize for the late response but I was in a bad car accident
Date: 5/28/2017 9:47:00 AM
Congrats on your tip top win, Brian! Well done. :)
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Brian Davey
Date: 5/28/2017 2:41:00 PM
Thank you Laura
Date: 5/28/2017 7:31:00 AM
Back for congrats on your top win, my friend!
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Brian Davey
Date: 5/28/2017 2:41:00 PM
Thanks again Kim
Date: 5/28/2017 2:19:00 AM
I really enjoyed the format and it was a clever poem that was simplistic enough to win 1st place!! Congratulations!
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Brian Davey
Date: 5/28/2017 5:07:00 AM
Thank you very much I enjoyed writing for yet another great contest of yours
Date: 5/22/2017 12:03:00 PM
A freaky kind of poem! I love: I'm not scaredut I am afraid!
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Brian Davey
Date: 5/23/2017 4:26:00 AM
Yes it is a lithe freaky but I am glad you liked it none the less. Thank you

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