Harvest Dreams

Windswept, the rows of leaves descent.
Bereft the bare of toppling dreamt.
The lamb of fluffiness gives clue.
A pram does shake with laughter coo.

The revenue of shapes and hues,
For heaven sweeps, creates such views.
Plush yards of harvest dreams full tilt.
Postcards of dawn or dusk and gilt.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Hind Avatar
November 15, 2024 at 6:26 PM
A lovely poem- I like how you do rhymes, they're not common...
Rodrigues Avatar
November 15, 2024 at 8:02 PM
I thank you for that! If you look you will see that the beginning of the sentences rhyme too :)
Dietrich Avatar
November 15, 2024 at 8:52 AM
I really like this, Kim. Happy Friday
Rodrigues Avatar
November 15, 2024 at 3:45 PM
Thank you, Andrea!
Read Avatar
November 14, 2024 at 12:06 PM
That was lovely Kim. Xx
Rodrigues Avatar
November 15, 2024 at 3:45 PM
Thank you, John!
Goldsmith Avatar
November 14, 2024 at 8:39 AM
I enjoyed reading about your "Harvest Dreams" in this wonderful write. Have a blessed day writing away.............
Rodrigues Avatar
November 14, 2024 at 11:30 AM
Be blessed, Paula! Thank You!
Andresen Avatar
November 14, 2024 at 6:45 AM
- Love the gilded dusk, Kim :) - hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
November 14, 2024 at 6:48 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise! So glad you liked that part!
Tor Avatar
November 14, 2024 at 6:39 AM
Love this Kim. Your descriptive words of Autumn pain a vibrant picture... Thanks for sharing
Rodrigues Avatar
November 14, 2024 at 6:47 AM
Thank you so much, Mike! :)
Rodgers Avatar
November 14, 2024 at 5:31 AM
Dear Kim, Oh what wonderful words expressing autumn's fleeting beauty. I loved your playful language and how you've captured the season's whimsical essence. I think your verses dance between nature's grand spectacle and life's tender moments, a wonderful canvas of magical, dreamlike landscape. Just Beautiful! Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Rodrigues Avatar
November 14, 2024 at 6:47 AM
Thank you so much, Daniel! Yesterday’s blustery weather made me want to capture its mood. Hugs ~ Kim
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