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Harvest Dreams

Windswept, the rows of leaves descent. Bereft the bare of toppling dreamt. The lamb of fluffiness gives clue. A pram does shake with laughter coo. The revenue of shapes and hues, For heaven sweeps, creates such views. Plush yards of harvest dreams full tilt. Postcards of dawn or dusk and gilt.

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Date: 11/15/2024 6:26:00 PM
A lovely poem- I like how you do rhymes, they're not common...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/15/2024 8:02:00 PM
I thank you for that! If you look you will see that the beginning of the sentences rhyme too :)
Date: 11/15/2024 8:52:00 AM
I really like this, Kim. Happy Friday
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/15/2024 3:45:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea!
Date: 11/14/2024 12:06:00 PM
That was lovely Kim. Xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/15/2024 3:45:00 PM
Thank you, John!
Date: 11/14/2024 8:39:00 AM
I enjoyed reading about your "Harvest Dreams" in this wonderful write. Have a blessed day writing away.............
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/14/2024 11:30:00 AM
Be blessed, Paula! Thank You!
Date: 11/14/2024 6:45:00 AM
- Love the gilded dusk, Kim :) - hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/14/2024 6:48:00 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise! So glad you liked that part!
Date: 11/14/2024 6:39:00 AM
Love this Kim. Your descriptive words of Autumn pain a vibrant picture... Thanks for sharing
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/14/2024 6:47:00 AM
Thank you so much, Mike! :)
Date: 11/14/2024 5:31:00 AM
Dear Kim, Oh what wonderful words expressing autumn's fleeting beauty. I loved your playful language and how you've captured the season's whimsical essence. I think your verses dance between nature's grand spectacle and life's tender moments, a wonderful canvas of magical, dreamlike landscape. Just Beautiful! Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/14/2024 6:47:00 AM
Thank you so much, Daniel! Yesterday’s blustery weather made me want to capture its mood. Hugs ~ Kim

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