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Harmful Touch

Damaged by just your harmful touch
I lie in pain and anguish from you

I want you to see the hurt felt
That which is caused by you, only you

You’re surely not allowed with me
Never, not ever, not anymore

Russell Sivey

Copyright © Russell Sivey | Year Posted 2012

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Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 3/9/2012 11:05:00 AM It is always a pleasure to read your poetry Russell. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on mine. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 3/6/2012 7:58:00 PM deep emphatic lines of rage shown with laces of angry emotions Russell.. luv the first two lines best of all luv.. Login to Reply

Ilene Bauer Date: 3/6/2012 9:31:00 AM powerful and sad! Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/6/2012 7:41:00 AM I am sorry for yours pain Russell,never,not ever,not anymore - well said. - oxox Anne-Lise Login to Reply

Tracy Edwards Date: 3/6/2012 7:03:00 AM Well I certainly wouldnt want to be on the other end of this poem Russell luv.. nice straight to the point write.. Hugs xxx Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 3/6/2012 5:31:00 AM I can feel the pain..The sad thing is most of the time the person who does this can not understand in any way the pain that one feels for whatever reason they are like they are..Thanks for the time spent at my works..Your kind reviews are uplifting..Sara Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 3/5/2012 11:15:00 PM such a emotional rant that pierces the heart, russell... enjoyed how you expressed the angst without going overboard... smashing!.. hugggs and more success! :) Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/5/2012 11:08:00 PM The hurt can be felt in this little poem, Russell. WAs this for a contest write? Or something in your life? Login to Reply