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Harmful Touch

Damaged by just your harmful touch I lie in pain and anguish from you I want you to see the hurt felt That which is caused by you, only you You’re surely not allowed with me Never, not ever, not anymore Russell Sivey

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/9/2012 11:05:00 AM

It is always a pleasure to read your poetry Russell. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on mine. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/6/2012 7:58:00 PM

deep emphatic lines of rage shown with laces of angry emotions Russell.. luv the first two lines best of all luv..

Ilene Bauer

Date: 3/6/2012 9:31:00 AM

powerful and sad!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/6/2012 7:41:00 AM

I am sorry for yours pain Russell,never,not ever,not anymore - well said. - oxox Anne-Lise

Tracy Edwards

Date: 3/6/2012 7:03:00 AM

Well I certainly wouldnt want to be on the other end of this poem Russell luv.. nice straight to the point write.. Hugs xxx

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/6/2012 5:31:00 AM

I can feel the pain..The sad thing is most of the time the person who does this can not understand in any way the pain that one feels for whatever reason they are like they are..Thanks for the time spent at my works..Your kind reviews are uplifting..Sara

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/5/2012 11:15:00 PM

such a emotional rant that pierces the heart, russell... enjoyed how you expressed the angst without going overboard... smashing!.. hugggs and more success! :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/5/2012 11:08:00 PM

The hurt can be felt in this little poem, Russell. WAs this for a contest write? Or something in your life?