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Nette Onclaud's Spin a Shadorma 6/2/25

Harlot

her skivvies
fine imported lace
King Louis
satisfied
cologne covers the harlot
it stinks at Versaille

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Len Gasun

June 8, 2025 at 7:26 AM

Big Congrats on you win too and this wonderful shadorma my dear poet friend Kim! Thanks a lot for sharing. God bless!

Andrea Dietrich

June 7, 2025 at 4:25 PM

Loved yours. Congrats

Kim Rodrigues

June 7, 2025 at 4:47 PM

Thank you, Andrea! :)

Charlotte Puddifoot

June 7, 2025 at 8:14 AM

an original take on the theme - congrats on your win in the contest!

Kim Rodrigues

June 7, 2025 at 8:24 AM

Thank you, Charlotte! :)

Maclawrence Famuyiwa

June 6, 2025 at 9:17 PM

Nice. Congrats on your win.

Kim Rodrigues

June 7, 2025 at 5:46 AM

Thank you, Maclawrence!

Paula Goldsmith

June 6, 2025 at 12:10 PM

Congratulations on your win. What a story in just a few lines. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Harlot" write. Have a blessed day with your win.......

Kim Rodrigues

June 7, 2025 at 5:47 AM

Thank you, Paula!

Krishnanand Guptar

June 6, 2025 at 11:10 AM

Congratulations on your win in this contest with a fine write. Wishing you a pleasant weekend.

Kim Rodrigues

June 7, 2025 at 5:45 AM

Thank you, Kriahnanand!

Lin Lane

June 3, 2025 at 12:23 PM

That would certainly stink. Very cleverly written, Kim.

Lin Lane

June 7, 2025 at 5:47 AM

Yep, I knew what you meant. Liked yours better than the 1st place choices.

Kim Rodrigues

June 7, 2025 at 5:44 AM

Thank you, Lin! The stink relates to the cologne, actual Versailles and loosely to the sin that was rampant in that place.

Andrea Dietrich

June 2, 2025 at 11:13 PM

Wow. Great job!!

Kim Rodrigues

June 3, 2025 at 5:31 AM

Thank you, Andrea! :)

Paige Hind

June 2, 2025 at 8:45 PM

A little piece of history- I refreshed my mind some by reading about her, what a tragic end for her, it stinks in more than Versaille...to be executed that way, ugh... it seems Louis had a part, too....he was in no way innocent

Kim Rodrigues

June 2, 2025 at 9:04 PM

Thank you for reading and your comment. I appreciate it!

Harlot

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