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Nette Onclaud's Spin a Shadorma 6/2/25

her skivvies fine imported lace King Louis satisfied cologne covers the harlot it stinks at Versaille

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Date: 6/8/2025 7:26:00 AM
Big Congrats on you win too and this wonderful shadorma my dear poet friend Kim! Thanks a lot for sharing. God bless!
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Date: 6/7/2025 4:25:00 PM
Loved yours. Congrats
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/7/2025 4:47:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea! :)
Date: 6/7/2025 8:14:00 AM
an original take on the theme - congrats on your win in the contest!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/7/2025 8:24:00 AM
Thank you, Charlotte! :)
Date: 6/6/2025 9:17:00 PM
Nice. Congrats on your win.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/7/2025 5:46:00 AM
Thank you, Maclawrence!
Date: 6/6/2025 12:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. What a story in just a few lines. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Harlot" write. Have a blessed day with your win.......
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/7/2025 5:47:00 AM
Thank you, Paula!
Date: 6/6/2025 11:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in this contest with a fine write. Wishing you a pleasant weekend.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/7/2025 5:45:00 AM
Thank you, Kriahnanand!
Date: 6/3/2025 12:23:00 PM
That would certainly stink. Very cleverly written, Kim.
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Lin Lane
Date: 6/7/2025 5:47:00 AM
Yep, I knew what you meant. Liked yours better than the 1st place choices.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/7/2025 5:44:00 AM
Thank you, Lin! The stink relates to the cologne, actual Versailles and loosely to the sin that was rampant in that place.
Date: 6/2/2025 11:13:00 PM
Wow. Great job!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/3/2025 5:31:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea! :)
Date: 6/2/2025 8:45:00 PM
A little piece of history- I refreshed my mind some by reading about her, what a tragic end for her, it stinks in more than Versaille...to be executed that way, ugh... it seems Louis had a part, too....he was in no way innocent
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/2/2025 9:04:00 PM
Thank you for reading and your comment. I appreciate it!

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