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Nette Onclaud's Spin a Shadorma 6/2/25

her skivvies
fine imported lace
King Louis
satisfied
cologne covers the harlot
it stinks at Versaille

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Len Gasun

Date: 6/8/2025 7:26:00 AM

Big Congrats on you win too and this wonderful shadorma my dear poet friend Kim! Thanks a lot for sharing. God bless!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/7/2025 4:25:00 PM

Loved yours. Congrats

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/7/2025 4:47:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea! :)

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 6/7/2025 8:14:00 AM

an original take on the theme - congrats on your win in the contest!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/7/2025 8:24:00 AM

Thank you, Charlotte! :)

Maclawrence Famuyiwa

Date: 6/6/2025 9:17:00 PM

Nice. Congrats on your win.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/7/2025 5:46:00 AM

Thank you, Maclawrence!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/6/2025 12:10:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. What a story in just a few lines. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Harlot" write. Have a blessed day with your win.......

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/7/2025 5:47:00 AM

Thank you, Paula!

Krishnanand Guptar

Date: 6/6/2025 11:10:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in this contest with a fine write. Wishing you a pleasant weekend.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/7/2025 5:45:00 AM

Thank you, Kriahnanand!

Lin Lane

Date: 6/3/2025 12:23:00 PM

That would certainly stink. Very cleverly written, Kim.

Lin Lane
Date: 6/7/2025 5:47:00 AM

Yep, I knew what you meant. Liked yours better than the 1st place choices.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/7/2025 5:44:00 AM

Thank you, Lin! The stink relates to the cologne, actual Versailles and loosely to the sin that was rampant in that place.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/2/2025 11:13:00 PM

Wow. Great job!!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/3/2025 5:31:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea! :)

Paige Hind

Date: 6/2/2025 8:45:00 PM

A little piece of history- I refreshed my mind some by reading about her, what a tragic end for her, it stinks in more than Versaille...to be executed that way, ugh... it seems Louis had a part, too....he was in no way innocent

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/2/2025 9:04:00 PM

Thank you for reading and your comment. I appreciate it!

Harlot

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