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Harem of Blue Butterflies

A harem of blue butterflies, she’s chic. Tiers of soft pink satin and her mystique. Moment of weakness, Dawn’s drawn to the sheikh, then flutter of wings. 9/2/2020 Greg Barden’s Rithimus Divisa 5 Original: Art of Romance

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Sigrid Ermine

Date: 9/20/2020 10:13:00 PM

Hello, Kim. My warmest Congratulations on your deserved Win! .... . . Beautiful, extremely touching. I am breathless and scared of the wisdom I'll find in full Art of Romance.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/21/2020 3:26:00 AM

Thank you, Sigrid!

Elaine George

Date: 9/20/2020 4:11:00 PM

Simply beautiful, Kim. Many congrats on your win. ~ Elaine

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/20/2020 5:41:00 PM

Thank you, Elaine!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/20/2020 2:10:00 PM

Gorgeous imagery, Kim. Congrats in the contest.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/20/2020 5:41:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 9/20/2020 9:14:00 AM

Oh so colorful a "chic" "mystique" Kim. Beautiful images. I can see and hear the "flutter of wings." Congratulations on your winning placement.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/20/2020 5:41:00 PM

Thank you, Sam!

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 9/3/2020 8:07:00 PM

An alluring, swirling curtain of blue, I can feel their soft wings, best of luck in the contest, Kim-

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/3/2020 8:28:00 PM

Thank you, Michelle! :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/3/2020 3:10:00 AM

Beautiful creatures Kim, my cousin visited a butterfly farm in Stratford on Avon and she said it was amazing, every colour under the sun. Good luck Tom

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/3/2020 6:54:00 AM

Lots of soundless wings. Beautiful!