Kim Rodrigues Poet Rhyme

Harem of Blue Butterflies

A harem of blue butterflies, she’s chic.
      Tiers of soft pink satin and her mystique.
Moment of weakness, Dawn’s drawn to the sheikh,
                      then flutter of wings.

                               9/2/2020

Greg Barden’s Rithimus Divisa 5

Original: Art of Romance

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Sigrid Ermine September 20, 2020 at 10:13 PM Hello, Kim. My warmest Congratulations on your deserved Win! .... . . Beautiful, extremely touching. I am breathless and scared of the wisdom I'll find in full Art of Romance. Kim Rodrigues September 21, 2020 at 3:26 AM Thank you, Sigrid!

Elaine George September 20, 2020 at 4:11 PM Simply beautiful, Kim. Many congrats on your win. ~ Elaine Kim Rodrigues September 20, 2020 at 5:41 PM Thank you, Elaine!

Andrea Dietrich September 20, 2020 at 2:10 PM Gorgeous imagery, Kim. Congrats in the contest. Kim Rodrigues September 20, 2020 at 5:41 PM Thank you, Andrea!

Sam Kauffman September 20, 2020 at 9:14 AM Oh so colorful a "chic" "mystique" Kim. Beautiful images. I can see and hear the "flutter of wings." Congratulations on your winning placement. Kim Rodrigues September 20, 2020 at 5:41 PM Thank you, Sam!

Michelle Faulkner September 3, 2020 at 8:07 PM An alluring, swirling curtain of blue, I can feel their soft wings, best of luck in the contest, Kim- Kim Rodrigues September 3, 2020 at 8:28 PM Thank you, Michelle! :)

Tom Cunningham September 3, 2020 at 3:10 AM Beautiful creatures Kim, my cousin visited a butterfly farm in Stratford on Avon and she said it was amazing, every colour under the sun. Good luck Tom Kim Rodrigues September 3, 2020 at 6:54 AM Lots of soundless wings. Beautiful!