Hard Landing

I saw a frightened argus pheasant 
fall out of a cloudless sky crashing
into my limpid pool
kids thought that was so cool
ah, but for him it wasn't too pleasant
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Mehta Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 6:43 PM
Very wonderful write in Limerick, Andrew
Shetley Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 11:58 AM
well done friend!
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