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Hard Landing

I saw a frightened argus pheasant 
fall out of a cloudless sky crashing
into my limpid pool
kids thought that was so cool
ah, but for him it wasn't too pleasant

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/8/2010 6:43:00 PM
Very wonderful write in Limerick, Andrew
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Date: 10/8/2010 11:58:00 AM
well done friend!
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