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I watch the harbor through the falling snow the sky and sea form one vast, gray tableau the sun is nothing but a weak, background glow the scene draws me, as if hypnotically. Five mile’s lighthouse warnings go unvoiced its strobes not lashing out, so what’s its point it stands majestically but disappoints replaced electronically A tiny lobster boat makes its landward way towards the inlet from the wider channel bay a powdery blizzard is underway which melts into the mirror sea. Ospreys still hunt round the lobsterman's pride snowflakes stain them as they soar and glide other seabirds huddle side by side shivering and crowing lividly. Through the narrows the lonely boat steams past icy Luddington Rock and East Breakwater's breech its berths and moorings, within minutes reach and sadly, it’s time for me to leave. . . Songs for this: Far Far Away (Charles Tone Mix) [feat. Brenda Boykin] by Tape Five Hypnosis Theme (feat. Marina Quaisse) by Wax Tailor

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Date: 2/26/2025 8:12:00 PM
a visual tableau of delicate imagery - well expressed
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 2/27/2025 7:55:00 AM
the naturalistic imagery - very nicely conveyed
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Anais Vionet
Date: 2/27/2025 7:22:00 AM
Thanks, Matt ??
Date: 2/18/2025 9:22:00 PM
Anais, "Five mile’s lighthouse warnings go unvoiced // its strobes not lashing out, so what’s its point" Crushed it in beautiful soft skies. "And I'm far, far a-way With my feet down in the crowds". -Richard
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Anais Vionet
Date: 2/18/2025 9:59:00 PM
Thank you, Richard. =]
Date: 2/16/2025 12:10:00 PM
Such a beautiful piece Anais, with nice rhyme and flow along with good expression too.I love your snowy pic, feels so warm and glowing. Take care, Gordon
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Anais Vionet
Date: 2/16/2025 2:33:00 PM
Thanks, Gordon =]
Date: 2/15/2025 1:28:00 PM
Beautiful, on multiple levels
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Anais Vionet
Date: 2/15/2025 5:48:00 PM
Thank you, on multiple levels =]

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