Harbinger

Here in this hallowed place
  he sees great signs foretold
    hidden, sacred meanings
      hold oracles of truth
    happenings yet to be 
  hear his prophetic words
herald of the future.







Written on 2/19/2017
Pleiades
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Johnson-Saunders Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 9:05 PM
Great word choice, Laura...I love the uniqueness and flow of your poem. It's excellent! Congrats to you!! Hugs, Rhonda :)
Leiser Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 11:57 PM
Thank you, Rhonda! I'm happy you liked it. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 8:07 PM
Very nice, Laura! Congrats!
Leiser Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 10:06 PM
Thanks, Kim. :)
May Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 1:57 PM
Love the flow in your poem Laura..Congrats on your win
Leiser Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 10:05 PM
Thank you, Joseph. :) of
Smith Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 8:31 AM
Back to congratulate you...
Leiser Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 10:05 PM
Thanks, Charlie. :)
Andresen Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 2:46 AM
- Congratulations on your great poem in Pleiades H contest, Laura :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Leiser Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 10:05 PM
Thank you, Anne Lise. :)
Neumann Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 2:38 AM
The future is here...Congratulations, Kai
Leiser Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 10:04 PM
Thanks, Kai. :)
Roper Avatar
February 23, 2017 at 11:31 PM
Back to congratulate you Hugs Eve
Leiser Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 10:04 PM
Thank you, Eve. :)
Singh Avatar
February 23, 2017 at 8:38 PM
Lovely! Congrats!!
Leiser Avatar
February 23, 2017 at 10:13 PM
Thank you, Sushma :)
Dietrich Avatar
February 23, 2017 at 7:34 PM
WEll done for this word. You chose an original word that not many would think to do, Laura. Congrats
Leiser Avatar
February 23, 2017 at 10:13 PM
Thank you, Andrea :)
Merryman Avatar
February 23, 2017 at 5:27 PM
A creative topic and you did an excellent job of depicting it. Very smooth. Congrats on your 2nd place win! Blessings, Kim
Leiser Avatar
February 23, 2017 at 10:12 PM
Thanks Kim, for placing me in your Peiades contest! I'm really enjoying this form, and you have been kind to me :)
Krampe Avatar
February 23, 2017 at 5:19 PM
Lovely! Congrats on your win, Laura.
Leiser Avatar
February 23, 2017 at 10:11 PM
Thank you, Agnes :)
Daniel Avatar
February 22, 2017 at 7:06 AM
A winner, Laura:)
Leiser Avatar
February 22, 2017 at 1:18 PM
Thank you, Jo. :)
Callus Avatar
February 21, 2017 at 4:14 PM
Such a well delivered Pleiades, Laura. Initially I was going to do this theme for the contest, but something made me change my mind. Hope to see you on the winners' list :) Regards // paul
Leiser Avatar
February 22, 2017 at 1:19 PM
Thanks, Paul! I'm glad you like it. :)
Roper Avatar
February 20, 2017 at 1:32 PM
Wonderful verse, Laura, I have seen a few and they are all great,,, good luck in the contest... Hugs Eve
Leiser Avatar
February 20, 2017 at 3:00 PM
Thank you, Eve. :)
Godwin Avatar
February 19, 2017 at 8:18 PM
You picked a whopper of a word and completely delivered! Good luck, Laura, and all the best ... CayCay
Leiser Avatar
February 19, 2017 at 8:25 PM
Thanks, CayCay! I wanted to think a bit outside the box... :)
Hamilton Avatar
February 19, 2017 at 5:35 PM
Ooh I like it, looks like a winner to me!
Leiser Avatar
February 19, 2017 at 8:26 PM
Thank you, John! Your words are very kind :)
Smith Avatar
February 19, 2017 at 5:09 PM
Well done Laura...
Leiser Avatar
February 19, 2017 at 8:26 PM
Thank you, Charlie :)
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